About Seven Wonders

LOVELYHONEY on May 22, 2009

Some one wrote about seven wonders,and felt unhappy that I had missed such a beautiful endeavour. Hence this reply.

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A few of seven

Just wonderful friend,
My friend list is bit too long,
I am slicing some,
So I can read more,
Of the few, than none,

Of the many.
Your snaps tell us the depth of love you portray;
will you make a Taj Mahal, for me?
If in your heart I stay.

Give way to the Great Wall of China,
It is a great partition,
between many a human.

The leaning tower of Pisa,
Is like my bent back,
I age,

As does the Pisa lean,
at this stage.

The rest I shall write about,
when I hear from you,
Your Eiffel tower is still,
Exquisitely beautiful.

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Comments (10)

CHAN LEE PENG on May 22, 2009
So, my article http://www.trifter.com/Practical-Travel/Adventure-Travel/Seven-Remarkable-Wonders-of-the-World.722273 gives you inspiration to write this poem. Very done, I don’t know you’re such talented!
LOVELYHONEY on May 22, 2009
Thanks for your immediate appreciation,
My salutes and regards to u,
4 Ur acknowledgements.
I am no poet,
But just a passer by,
I juggle with words,
Just don’t ask me why.
I am just a simple person,
A scientist at that,
Trying to learn how the human mind,
Is so flat.
There are all are kinds of minds,
In this world which is a stage,
We all are its actors,
Some are its page,
And in present times,
In rage,
We swiftly and suddenly age
clay hurtubise on May 22, 2009
Nice job. Did you read where they just discovered more of the Great Wall? Its’ been buried, like a quiet love.
Thanks,
Clay
Joe Dorish on May 22, 2009
Just leave a smiley so I know you were there.
Darla Cooke on May 22, 2009
Very interesting poem.
ken bultman on May 22, 2009
nolo comprende
jewelsofmine on May 22, 2009
Very compelling. Nice!
Judy T Lloyd on May 22, 2009
Interesting pictures for sure.
George W Whitehead on May 23, 2009
I liked this, LH.
Pinaki Ghosh on May 23, 2009
Thanx for giving me so importance

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