In a Moment So Divine

Poetic Enigma on May 16, 2009

Tags: apple, chosen, creme de la crop, divine, grape, love, Poetry, ripe, Soulmate, tree, vine, You Picked Me

A poem about love, and someone choosing you out of all the other fish in the sea. Hope you enjoy!

You picked me,
Like an apple
hanging from a tree,
or a grape
right off the vine
You picked me,
out of everyone
One moment in time

You picked me,
Even though I did not think
I was good enough
to be chosen
but despite it all,
you picked me
out of everyone,
One moment in time

You picked me,
Somehow you thought
I was the ripest one
The creme de la crop
I only hope I can continue
to make you believe that you were right
You picked me,
out of everyone,
One moment in time

You picked me,
Like an apple
hanging from a tree,
or a grape right off the vine
You picked me,
In a moment so divine

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STEVE666 on May 16, 2009
This is a great poem PE. Though, why the surprise? Sure you’re the best apple on the tree.
Christine Ramsay on May 16, 2009
That is so beautiful Alex. It is such a lovely feeling to be picked ur by someone you want to be with.

Christine
HatedNation on May 16, 2009
One day maybe I will know what this is like so for now…Nice work.
ladybaby on May 16, 2009
Sweet poem. You must be happy that the one who picked you, is the one you had hoped would pick you. Very nice!
Debra. on May 16, 2009
Beautiful poem as always, Poetic!
Sheila on May 16, 2009
A very sweet write=)
However on May 16, 2009
Most people, like apples, get picked just because they are the nearest most available, not necessarily the best on the tree.
poet09 on May 16, 2009
You are so creative in your writing, very nice. Keep touching our hearts.
Melody SJAL on May 16, 2009
Very lovely and sweet. What a nice shot too.
Kate Smedley on May 16, 2009
Lovely poem as always and lovely imagery.
Joie Schmidt on May 16, 2009
What a sweet, romantic poem*

Blessings.

Sincerely,

-Liane Schmidt.
S M Blomker on May 16, 2009
beautiful piece od poetry…I liked it a lot.
anonymous voice on May 16, 2009
“however”,I happen to think apples are great, so hush your face
Jo Oliver on May 16, 2009
so sweet and great imagery
Mr Ghaz on May 17, 2009
Great post!..Thats really nice ones..I liked it..Well done and thanx for sharing this great poem.
missbrandi on May 26, 2009
I love this! Check out mine if you get a chance!
Jerrykbradford on May 28, 2009
How incredibly sweet and honest!

BRAVO!

I loved it. I especially like “somehow you thought I was the ripest one. The The creme de la crop” Wonderful play on words and use of metaphor.

Jerry
rizzei on May 30, 2009
what a great pleasure to be picked from all the rest. nice one:) God bless.:)
Ruch on Jun 27, 2009
Lovely poem…

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