One mile from where the pavement ends, Stands the old homestead where my stormy tale begins.

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  • Christine Ramsay on Jun 26, 2009

    That is a terrific story, Clay. We went through a great storm in 1987 and that was very frightening so I can imagine how you felt during your hurricane. It is just as well you were able to warn your dad. A very well written and gripping piece.

    Christine

  • clay hurtubise on Jun 26, 2009

    PHIL! Great piece! Loved how the story pulls you in and moves along at a quick clip.
    Thanks,
    Clay

  • Mr Ghaz on Jun 26, 2009

    Well done!!..very interesting read as always..well presented too..I LIKED it so much..keep it up and thanx for sharing this magnificent piece.

  • Kate Smedley on Jun 26, 2009

    That’s absolutely terrifying!! What a story…so glad you came through it OK, I love the description of the radio by the way. Keep these coming Phill, they are great anecdotes (and think about putting them in a book!)

  • Elizabeth Abbott on Jun 26, 2009

    I enjoyed this so much! I can distinctly remember each of your tales. I wonder where that yellow car fender went! Perhaps it was from an old state vehicle! Maybe it was from a cab!!! When you start hearing that tin go, it is bad!!! I so like your tales! LizP.S. I agree with my kind friend Kate!! I wish I had a series of books with your tales!

  • patti on Jun 29, 2009

    I told you Phil, I can get all your stories on a disk and send it to get published. It will be cool. Tales of Life by Phil Senter. What ya think? Give me a call. Patti

  • Katien on Jul 11, 2009

    An enthralling anecdote! It just goes to show that being inquisitive as a child pays off!

  • bwellman on Jul 15, 2009

    I enjoyed the read Phil. In reading I was again reminded how quickly adults dismiss the actions and words of children. Children have fought wars and created whole societies and still we need proof of what they say. I’m glad your family listened, it would have been sad in more than one way if they hadn’t. Thanks for sharing.

  • ken bultman on Aug 18, 2009

    Well told. Been there, done that. Hurricane Charlie put my house in the landfill. Rode out Frances in a pickup and Jeanne in a leaky motel.

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