Mike was an Asian old hat courtesy of Uncle Sam and the draft that sent him to Vietnam in the late 60s. After his tour of duty in Nam, he bounced around Asia for awhile, went back to the States got a college degree and bounced right back to Asia teaching English in Taiwan, Thailand, and eventually Korea.

“Damn Mike, that’s terrible. I would have freaked,” the first teacher said. “What did you do?”

“The rat wouldn’t move. It just kept on sitting there staring at me,” Mike continued. “I thought for sure as soon as I moved it would move. It was like it was hypnotized or something. Finally I grabbed a book near my bed, swatted it and it ran away.”

“Are you okay Mike?” I asked.

Mike nodded and went to class.

By the end of the day, everyone in the institute was talking about the Mike’s rat and how freaked they would have been had it happened to them. His apartment mate, Alex confirmed the story and added one more crucial detail: how he and Mike had spent the rest of the night turning the apartment upside down trying to find that rat.

“Finally, we gave up, but we did locate where it had gotten into the apartment,” Alex said.

“Where was that,” I asked.

“In the kitchen, inside one of the cupboards,” Alex explained. “Our rat or the former rat had gnawed a hole in one corner of the cupboard and that is where we suspected it came in. We plugged up that hole good. If the rat did get in through that hole, it’s not going to get back in again.”

The next day, when Mike came into the staff room, he was just as visibly shaken as he had been the day before.

“Well, did your plug job do the trick?” a teacher asked.

Mike shook his head. “The rat pushed the plug out. He was in my room when I went home last night. Alex and I chased him around the apartment for an hour but he escaped again.”

Mike grabbed his class folder and muttered something about how he wished he had a baseball bat to smash the rat’s head in the next time he came back as he walked out of the staff room.

He was never the same after that rat incident. He had a hard time sleeping at night because he was worried the rat would come back. Many mornings, when he shuffled into the staff room after another sleepless night, wouldn’t say much to anyone other than a few grunts when someone asked him how he was that morning.

After two more terms, Mike had had enough of Korea and left. No one ever heard from him again.

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  • Guy Hogan on Nov 17, 2009

    Very nicely written. Well done. It reads just like a short story. Papa, it’s impressive.

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  • ken bultman on Nov 17, 2009

    Great story about a sad situation for your friend. Perhaps a Pied Piper should have been summoned.

  • Themax on Nov 17, 2009

    really great story,very interesting to read,Thanks for your sharing :)

  • Lady Sunshine on Nov 17, 2009

    Poor fellow. How audacious of the rat to be on his chest!

  • Reilley on Nov 17, 2009

    As always, Jeff, you cull the needed details of your stories and parse them out in spare, working prose, and your stories are always the better for it.

    I don’t really know why we drifted apart, but I am glad to see you still writing, and I will always take the time to check out your links when I see them.

    Be well, give warm regards to On, Bia, and Jeremy Aaron.

    Christopher

  • Authoress Terry E. Lyle on Nov 17, 2009

    I enjoyed your article, I like the clarity on how you wrote your piece, have you ever considered writing novels? Good work Sir.

  • Tanya Wallace on Nov 17, 2009

    A very intriguing tale.A true life short story taking a bad turn.That would have been a scary and horrible inccident for anyone to have to endure,I don’t think I would be able to sleep either!! It is hard to think that after the horrors he saw in vietnam that a rat could push him to the very edge but after a while it only takes one thing to send us to the brink. I wonder what happened to him. This was a well written story and a very enjoyable read!

  • Frances Lawrence on Nov 17, 2009

    A very interesting and well written tale.

  • Butterfly Musings on Nov 17, 2009

    this is awesome!!

  • Aleena on Nov 17, 2009

    Got caught up in it, great piece :]

  • Hansika on Nov 18, 2009

    excellant…thanks for the share…

  • lillyrose on Nov 18, 2009

    Another interesting story! if not a little chilly… and disturbing.

  • Christine Ramsay on Nov 18, 2009

    Wow! I don’t know how he managed to cope as well as he did. A rat on my chest! I would have died of fright. A really intriguing and well written story.

    Christine

  • cutedrishti8 on Nov 18, 2009

    Great piece of work

  • Francois Hagnere on Nov 18, 2009

    Extremely well written and so enjoyable read! Thank you so much.

  • Shirley Shuler on Nov 18, 2009

    I enjoyed reading your story, Papa. It was a well written and very interesting piece!

  • CutestPrincess on Dec 7, 2009

    Very interesting story. Looking forward to reading more soon.

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