A tribute to my dad.

   

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Every time Father’s Day comes, i can hear children saying praises for their fathers.  But never in my life did I experienced paying tribute to my dad.

     I grew up to a big family, 7 children all.  My brothers and sisters were all grown up when mom gave birth to me.  My parents were too busy with our family business, that’s why I seldom see my father at home.  If i can clearly recall, he’s at home at night time.  But when he is home, you can feel his presence. 

     When my father is at home, i can feel the sense of security.  I can feel that when he is around, I am safe.  Nobody can harm me.  But I know that he is a disciplinarian, having curfews at home is one evidence.  I remember once he said, ” you must be home before it dusks”.  But a disciplinarian as he is, I did not receive punishment from my dad.  My older siblings experienced punishment but not me. 

     My father is a man of few words. But if he did, you’ll stoop down when you did something wrong.  His words are so intensed that it will pierce your heart but he speaks with authority and if you just remember what he said, it is your gain because he is a man of principle.

     I told earlier that I did not experienced punishment from my dad but he is very strict to me and to my sister.  When I was about to go to college, he did not allow me to stay with my brother because i was so sickly then.  What if my migraine attacks.  A father’s concern for his dear child.  In my early years of schooling, he did not allows us to come to school riding the public bus or jeepney.  My brother will bring us to and fetch us from school.  My father is so protective of us.

     He may not be a first hand dad, a man of few words but a man of principles.  His actions speaks louder than his words.  He may be strict sometimes but I know the sincerity of his strictness.  His smile tells you, “Is everything okey, my child?” and his touch means so much saying, “don’t worry, child!  I am always here for you”.

     I am not close to my dad but all the principles he had thought me while he was still alive remained in my heart and will always be here forever.  Thank you dad for everything that you have thought me.

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  • swatilohani on May 22, 2009

    a touching ode to Dad

  • Ken Bultman on May 22, 2009

    I think you\’re closer to your dad than you think. Love the story. Write one about your mom.

  • Mr Ghaz on May 22, 2009

    Excellent!!..that was lovely piece..touching too..LOV it..Thanx for sharing this great stuff.

  • Darla Cooke on May 22, 2009

    A wonderful tribute to your dad.

  • Christine Ramsay on May 22, 2009

    Dad’s are very precious and they are so protective of us. Sometimes when we are young we don’t always appreciate that, but as we grow older we realise they do it for our own good. A great tribute.

    Christine

  • rajeev bhargava on May 22, 2009

    when you write something from your heart and soul, it is 100% pure and beautiful. I LOVE THIS POEM. i’m 100% confiident your dearest dad will love it too.

  • Kairos on May 22, 2009

    you made me think of my papa too.

  • kate smedley on May 22, 2009

    Beautiful tribute to your dad.

  • Joe Dorish on May 22, 2009

    Nice tribute

  • papaleng on May 22, 2009

    Well stated sister, Yes our dad is a man of few words!!! one thing i did recall telling us “I’m the eldest in the brood”;Children, I give you the liberty to choose whatever you want, but except one thing “Faith”. you have to stick it out with the Baptist faith. At present, each family attend a distinct Baptist church (Southern Baptist,Bible Baptist, Fundamental Baptist) isn’t it odd.LOL

  • clay hurtubise on May 22, 2009

    A nice piece about your Dad.
    Thanks,
    Clay

  • ajmera on May 22, 2009

    A nice way of expressing love for dad

  • Juancav on May 22, 2009

    Nice tribute,remember that someone in the family must rol the bad one.

  • Debra. on May 23, 2009

    A beautiful loving piece.

  • Judy Sheldon on May 23, 2009

    A very loving tribute. I could feel his presence. You portrayed it well. Thank you for introducing your father to us.

  • Jo Oliver on May 23, 2009

    very nice piece thank you papaleng for sharing this with me.

  • Olivia Reason on May 23, 2009

    Just in time for Father’s Day…

  • acecampillo on May 24, 2009

    A very nice work!

  • Ruby Hawk on May 24, 2009

    Your dad sounds like a fine father who had the best interest of his daughter at heart. You have a right to be proud.

  • Chris Stonecipher on May 25, 2009

    I agree with Ruby and Ken. Your father sounds wonderful and it seems like you are closer to your dad than you realize. This is a wonderful tribute to your father.

  • OLUWAFISAYO ADENIYAN on May 28, 2009

    Wow!! What an excellent and interesting piece of work. This article should win an award. I greatly admire your father. He is a great man and you are a great woman.

  • nutuba on May 28, 2009

    This is a wonderful tribute to your dad. He sounds like a remarkable man!

  • Purnomosidhi on May 31, 2009

    I like your expression of gratitude… thumb up

  • CutestPrincess on Jun 10, 2009

    youre such a nice daughter… you can make him smile because of this…

  • rizzei on Jul 1, 2009

    really nice and touching tribute to your father. we all can relate for we have our fathers who are always there to guide us:)

  • ashley ganda on Sep 15, 2009

    nice job mommy goodluck hope that more poems or message to come

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