Whenever I see a bus it makes me remember an unforgettable experience. This story is all about that memorable day.

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Two weeks ago we had a family reunion and while we were looking for a place to park our car,I saw the bus above. It looked very attractive because of its purple color.I am one of those Trionders who love to share pictures in Picable so I wasn’t able to resist taking a shot. It was about to leave so what I got was its back view. I wasn’t satisfied with the result that was why I didn’t upload it for Picable.Now I decided to include the picture here cause it reminded me of my unforgettable experience in a bus.

When I was in fourth grade our school’s PE teacher chose three girls and three boys to witness the Provincial Gymnastics Exhibition and I was chosen as one of those children. I was excited because my best friend was also chosen and our parents permitted us to go. I was also happy that we needed to ride a bus to reach the place.

We rode that day on a red bus which we call here as Philippine Rabbit. It was approximately a half an hour ride so my best friend and I kept on chatting as the wheels of the bus went round and round. Unfortunately my friend felt a little dizzy so she swapped places with one of the boys and sat next to our teacher. I was not used to talking with a boy so I decided to sing some Nursery Rhymes and some songs I know. I didn’t know that I was singing a bit louder than I thought. I noticed  some of the passengers listening so I kind a felt embarrassed and stopped singing. A few minutes after that I received a juice bought  from vendors in the bus.My teacher also received one and even the other five children. I thought our teacher bought it for us but when I was about to thank her I saw that she was surprised to receive one,too. It was a bit puzzling cause we know that the juice vendor would not give away juices for free. One of the passengers saw that we were puzzled and gave a signal that the one who bought the juices was a man sitting in the front row.When we reached the place were we needed to get off the bus, I smiled at the man and he smiled back. When the bus was out of our sight, my teacher said, ” I think it was because you were singing in the bus that was why that man decided to buy us juices. I think he enjoyed it us much as we did.”

Now, I do sing in a church choir however I don’t have the confidence to sing a solo part. Whenever I remember that experience, it makes me smile. At least once I did and someone appreciated it.

Here’s an amusing video of the care bears singing Wheels on the Bus:

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  • chris73 on May 19, 2009

    hihi :) keep singing!

  • papaleng on May 19, 2009

    a very nice story and experience. You remind me of my second daughter who really is a good singer. and every time she has the opportunity she will surely render a song, regardless who are the audience are..

  • Kate Smedley on May 19, 2009

    What a lovely story Dee, thanks for sharing and keep on singing!

  • DA Cournean on May 19, 2009

    What a nice story..

  • nobert soloria bermosa on May 19, 2009

    wow,such a wonderful story ma’am Dee,I was a choir member also way back my elem and HS days,i did some solo performance and still do sometimes. i think singing solo in front of a large crowd is one of the most exciting things to do, there so much fun, thrill and excitement on it….do you remember NAMCYA? nakaabot naman kami hanggang regional level,thanks for the wonderful story

  • Ruby Hawk on May 19, 2009

    What a neat story, You will remember that nice man all your life. We never know how we effect another person when we render a kindness. this story should remind us to do every kind deed we can.Who knows what the end result will be.

  • Liane Schmidt on May 20, 2009

    What a sweet story!

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • revivor on May 20, 2009

    unless it was a cunning plan to stop you singing!? (only joking!!) thanks for the great little story – revivor

  • Betty Carew on May 20, 2009

    What a wonderful story Dee I really enjoyed reading it.

  • seashell66 on May 21, 2009

    How nice to have made him smile.

  • CA Johnson on May 22, 2009

    I agree with everyone Dee. It was a really great story. I think you should keep singing too. :)

  • rizzei on May 28, 2009

    this one’s cool. i really enjoyed reading it:) i love singing too..:)God bless.

  • CutestPrincess on Jun 8, 2009

    wonderful story and experienced dee!

  • Fresh Writing on Jun 23, 2009

    Arg! Now that song is stuck in my head…\”the wheels on the bus go round and round, round and round…\”

    Good photo!

    -Fresh Writing

  • shaun simpson on Jul 31, 2009

    really enjoyed this!

  • Luffy12 on Sep 2, 2009

    want to ride on a short bus?

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