A page story from my life’s journal years back.

                Is there salvation in a group of words? How do we rule our life finding our luck in a combination of numbers? Being an average reader, I have sought consolation in printed words on books and magazines while occasionally taking a bet on the national lottery. Partly believing what I read and taking for granted the details while I managed to dislodge boredom out of my head, everything seemed to be working out well. For the most part, I often failed to verify the results on the evening lottery draw unknowing if I had been a millionaire who disposed off my lottery ticket without much thought have I lost my right to the jackpot. Everything had been taken as an end in itself and I seemed to have lost my taste to expect for life’s remaining surprises. Except for moments where my close encounters with words and numbers give me an access to remembering an experience in my life without much trying.  It has less implication on semantics and numerology but it brings a spell of difference opening a portal through time allowing me to get in touch with my past. Then I gain that fresh attitude to face the present however embarrassing the course of the story gets.             

The Flight Order

             It was a piece  of  short bond paper cut in half bearing printed words and numbers from the computer printer which gives me directions on my course of actions for the day, and it reads:

Flight Orders

Number: 2001-265                                                                                           December 2, 2001

PILOTS & CREW                 : PSINSP VICENTE MA

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Comments (21)
  • rizzei on Oct 1, 2009

    Mission accomplished! that was a long and interesting read!!

    it’s like, waking up in a sudden was part of every scene..LOL
    0500H was cool!! 5 am? nice!

  • Brenda Nelson on Oct 1, 2009

    to be honest you kinda lost me. I know you are a brilliant writter, and this was probably brilliantly written, perhaps its too early in the morning for me.. or just not enough ponies in the story! I could never be a military person. lol take care. perhaps we shall all win the lottery soon…any lottery.

  • ken bultman on Oct 1, 2009

    I accept the weak link. I would have loved to have ridden with you on you various rides.

  • Mr Ghaz on Oct 1, 2009

    Wow!! Excellent piece..This is a wonderful stuff..unique and well presented too..Love this work..you’re really good writer my friend:)

  • CHAN LEE PENG on Oct 1, 2009

    You’re really a talented writer. Keep more coming! I’d had a great time reading your story here. I clicked you “liked it”.

  • lillyrose on Oct 1, 2009

    what a cascade of colour and imagery! an exciting piece. x

  • monica55 on Oct 1, 2009

    A very long but great story.
    Monica.

  • Francois Hagnere on Oct 1, 2009

    Fascinating. You are so talented my friend! This brought back so many memories for me too…Great work!
    Take care my friend.
    François

  • Jenny Heart on Oct 1, 2009

    Excellent indeed my friend! Great writing!

  • Melody SJAL on Oct 1, 2009

    WSow, what a narrative of an extraordinary experience.

  • Amanda N Miller on Oct 1, 2009

    This is a very interesting piece that got me thinking. Thanks for sharing.

  • Faith Hodge on Oct 2, 2009

    Very long piece. I understood most of it. Some beautiful thoughts like dying beside a righteous man and beautiful scenery. Some scary moments, I kind of lost my breath there in the clouds! Thank you for sharing.

  • chitragopi on Oct 2, 2009

    Exciting narration, but took me some time to finish it though.

  • Ruby Hawk on Oct 2, 2009

    Beautifully written,My grandson is Crew Chief of the Black Hawk, Makes me wonder if this is his routine?

  • papaleng on Oct 3, 2009

    I enjoy every part of your story. Solve ang araw ko..

  • xoxo on Oct 3, 2009

    A very well written piece. Salamat kabayan.

  • Jane Jane on Oct 4, 2009

    Now I know you are. haha. a nice story and very long but you’ve manage to make it interesting.

  • chantell on Oct 4, 2009

    Great story, Thanks for sharing

  • Sourav on Oct 7, 2009

    Well written… liked the writing style. :)

  • Lee Ness on Oct 8, 2009

    I like your style and this a very nice long read just like a short story and sad in soome places and I felt you were confused in others confused as in your feelings not in the writing.
    Very unique
    Lee Ness

  • CutestPrincess on Oct 31, 2009

    Well, I see someone has been doing an awful lot of research and studying. Good job!

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