A page story from my life’s journal years back.

                   We towed the helicopter back at the hangar at the mid afternoon. There and then, the post flight inspection seemed the hardest thing to do. Thanks to my buddy in the flight detail who did the hard work for me. All the while, have I told about how I got a violet paper thing inside my pocket? With a share for my colleague and a cut for the day’s duty, the pilots have sworn about my luck that didn’t ended the day empty. 

Of Words and Numbers

                  Maybe God do take some bargain making wishes come true but short of the exact specifications. Maybe I’m running out of time failing to find my luck in the life game of words and numbers. I still had my old rank ever since I’ve joined that game show or rather, panel interview I mean. There’s indeed salvation in a group of words and my fate had brought me into it. Perhaps I could live a lifetime taking a bet on the National Lottery and never find the luck to take my winnings. But there’s always a good story to collect behind it, Mary Higgins Clark proved it. On the other hand, there’s every day’s flight and what has yet to be written. Could you imagine the cost of chartering a helicopter just to get a feel of the experience and tell something about it? Once in my life, I could simply be amused for having been cheated and there was that familiar line which seemed to provide some sense of fairness.  “According to statistics you are not the weakest link but as it was decided by the votes, you are the weakest link. Goodbye.”

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Acronyms used in the story:

DAP-Domestic Airport, A/C-Aircraft, PD-Provincial Director(PNP), PNP- Philippine National Police,RD-Regional Director(PNP), PSI-Police Senior Inspector(PNP Commissioned Officer Rank), PO2-Police Officer 2 (PNP Non Officer Rank), SILG-Secretary of the Interior and Local Government, PAGASA-Philippine Atmospheric Geophysical and Astronomical Services Administration (a weather bureau) 

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  • rizzei on Oct 1, 2009

    Mission accomplished! that was a long and interesting read!!

    it’s like, waking up in a sudden was part of every scene..LOL
    0500H was cool!! 5 am? nice!

  • Brenda Nelson on Oct 1, 2009

    to be honest you kinda lost me. I know you are a brilliant writter, and this was probably brilliantly written, perhaps its too early in the morning for me.. or just not enough ponies in the story! I could never be a military person. lol take care. perhaps we shall all win the lottery soon…any lottery.

  • ken bultman on Oct 1, 2009

    I accept the weak link. I would have loved to have ridden with you on you various rides.

  • Mr Ghaz on Oct 1, 2009

    Wow!! Excellent piece..This is a wonderful stuff..unique and well presented too..Love this work..you’re really good writer my friend:)

  • CHAN LEE PENG on Oct 1, 2009

    You’re really a talented writer. Keep more coming! I’d had a great time reading your story here. I clicked you “liked it”.

  • lillyrose on Oct 1, 2009

    what a cascade of colour and imagery! an exciting piece. x

  • monica55 on Oct 1, 2009

    A very long but great story.
    Monica.

  • Francois Hagnere on Oct 1, 2009

    Fascinating. You are so talented my friend! This brought back so many memories for me too…Great work!
    Take care my friend.
    François

  • Jenny Heart on Oct 1, 2009

    Excellent indeed my friend! Great writing!

  • Melody SJAL on Oct 1, 2009

    WSow, what a narrative of an extraordinary experience.

  • Amanda N Miller on Oct 1, 2009

    This is a very interesting piece that got me thinking. Thanks for sharing.

  • Faith Hodge on Oct 2, 2009

    Very long piece. I understood most of it. Some beautiful thoughts like dying beside a righteous man and beautiful scenery. Some scary moments, I kind of lost my breath there in the clouds! Thank you for sharing.

  • chitragopi on Oct 2, 2009

    Exciting narration, but took me some time to finish it though.

  • Ruby Hawk on Oct 2, 2009

    Beautifully written,My grandson is Crew Chief of the Black Hawk, Makes me wonder if this is his routine?

  • papaleng on Oct 3, 2009

    I enjoy every part of your story. Solve ang araw ko..

  • xoxo on Oct 3, 2009

    A very well written piece. Salamat kabayan.

  • Jane Jane on Oct 4, 2009

    Now I know you are. haha. a nice story and very long but you’ve manage to make it interesting.

  • chantell on Oct 4, 2009

    Great story, Thanks for sharing

  • Sourav on Oct 7, 2009

    Well written… liked the writing style. :)

  • Lee Ness on Oct 8, 2009

    I like your style and this a very nice long read just like a short story and sad in soome places and I felt you were confused in others confused as in your feelings not in the writing.
    Very unique
    Lee Ness

  • CutestPrincess on Oct 31, 2009

    Well, I see someone has been doing an awful lot of research and studying. Good job!

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