Flash Fiction with a twist.

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  • Goodselfme on Nov 27, 2009

    Well done! Great contents to keep the read going with anticipation.

  • ken bultman on Nov 27, 2009

    My,my. What a busy lady. Nice write…fun read.

  • Mr Ghaz on Nov 27, 2009

    This was lovely, attractive and unique story..well-presented too. i loved it..cheers 8) :)

  • martie on Nov 27, 2009

    well at least someone had a happy ending.

  • CHAN LEE PENG on Nov 27, 2009

    Good story here. Thanks for the morning’s read!

  • Ruby Hawk on Nov 27, 2009

    Pam, that was a well written story, way to go girl.The ending was perfect.

  • Brenda Nelson on Nov 27, 2009

    a very entertaining and fun read.

  • clay hurtubise on Nov 27, 2009

    Nice work!
    Thanks,
    Clay

  • kathie107 on Nov 28, 2009

    Such a nice story, I enjoyed reading it.

  • Themax on Nov 28, 2009

    really a good story,Thank you :)

  • Alicia Wind on Nov 28, 2009

    Where’s the rest chapter? Just an introduction or excerpt for a novel? You left your reader mesmerized for more….at least to me…!

  • Christine Ramsay on Nov 28, 2009

    Wow! She didn’t waste any time. A wonderful piece.

    Christine

  • papaleng on Nov 28, 2009

    Good story line, I enjoy reading it.

  • live and lovin life on Nov 28, 2009

    nicely written…

  • gianne on Nov 29, 2009

    What a great write! You sure did a lot with just a few words.

  • AlmaG on Nov 29, 2009

    Wonderful story! I enjoyed reading it :)

  • Yovita Siswati on Dec 3, 2009

    very entertaining. great work.

  • mkd1788 on Dec 4, 2009

    wonderful…greatly expressed…

  • Ruby Hawk on Dec 6, 2009

    another I like,

  • qasimdharamsy on Dec 12, 2009

    nice write good !!!

  • Ruby Hawk on Dec 12, 2009

    Another I like,

  • Bo Russo on Dec 16, 2009

    Pam gets down and dirty a little,I like it.

  • drelayaraja on Dec 18, 2009

    Nice one from you again….

  • virtualredheart on Dec 22, 2009

    I read some of your articles… you are good in writing… and you are creative too…

  • La Juana Maggiore on Dec 22, 2009

    I really enjoyed it, nice work!!

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