This is a fiction about two young boys who find a magic and powerful Fire Ball in the countryside in Henan and have no idea what is in store for them. Battles will be fought against the Shallot and there will be no limited to what will happen next.

The day had turned into night. The stars were shinning in the night skies. In a flash there was a Fire ball that was beaming down towards the city of Hong Kong. Everyone in the city was sound asleep and there were a few people out and about, mining their own business. The fire ball had fallen in the countryside. Where it lid up and made different colours like the rainbow. Then it laid there with shinning colours that was send down from the seven seas which belong to the family of earth, wind, fire, mental, and water.

As the night had faded and the sunrise had began. There lived a young boy named Sukoto. He lived with his grandfather Ying who was a great fighter in Martial Arts. He had retired from the city and returned back to his homeland in ‘Henan, which is in the south of china. As Sukoto went out the door he said goodbye to his grandfather and went to school. On the way to school he met up with his friend Yang as they were talking and walking. Both of them saw a light that was glowing beside a blossom tree. They both looked at each other and wondered what was going on so they both went to have a look. It was the fire ball that hit China the night before.

They looked at each other amazed to find such a unique Fire ball that was lying in the ground and left in the countryside. Yang decided to pick it up while Sukoto stood there with him watching. As they both looked at the fire ball. It lid up with all its different colours like the Rainbow. Yang rubbed the fire ball with his hands and as he did an image showed up with an ancient Shallot who he looked powerful and strong.

There was also a woman who appeared to them and warned them to be careful of this as he was returning back to collect what was his.

Yang dropped the fire ball and both of them looked at each other.

Sukoto then picked it up and wrapped it in his jumper and put it straight in his bag. Yang looked stunned and shocked as they both made their way to school.

As Sukoto and Yang were talking they decided to keep it a secret but got scared as they knew that the Shallot will be after them and the fire ball. As they were sitting in class together there was a loud sound coming out of Sukoto’s bag. Everyone in class looked at him. Luckily the bell rang for home time.

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  • Teves on Nov 7, 2009

    Nice one…

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