Got a new chapter written. This is going to be one long story with lots of twists and turns.

Chapter Four: A friend in Need.

Here’s links to the pervious chapters.

First Love Isn’t Always True Love 1

First Love Isn’t Always True Love Two

First Love Isn’t Always True Love Three

Now, on with the story.

Chapter Four: A Friend in Need

The next day Anna called around to her friends to find someone to help her move her things. She only had two morning classes that day and the afternoon free. Plus, it was her night off of work, so this day was as good as it was going to get, but to her dismay everyone was busy.

She cried out in frustration as she heard a knock on the door. “Who is it?” she called out.

“It’s Remy,” she heard a voice from the other side of the door. “Ya alright it dere?”

“Yeah,” she said as she opened the door. “Just havin’ a crisis, that’s all.”

“Anyt’ing Remy could help wid?” he asked.

She thought for a moment. “Well, maybe,” she said as he came into her apartment. “You see, I need the get mah stuff from my old place, but ah don’t wanna go over there alone.” He looked puzzled by her words. “My ex-boyfriend still lives there, and I don’t…”

She stopped choking on the words looking as if she were going to cry. “Hey, it’s alright, chere.” He tried to take her arm, but she flinched. He noticed a good sized bruise there and said, “Did he do dat to you?”

She couldn’t speak. She just nodded her head and turned away. “Ah’m sorry. Ah…”

“Don’t have t’say not’hing,” he said, putting his hands on her shoulders. “No real man ever do dat to a lady, especially one he loves.”

She looked back at him and smiled. “Ah wish ah could have figured that out long ago.”

“Den dis not the only time he hurt you?” he asked.

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Comments (12)
  • Dora77 on Jan 28, 2012

    Interesting,i like to read in bits and pieces which has no beginning and end…..but i’m yet to read other parts of the same.

    Thanks.

  • avissado on Jan 28, 2012

    very nice and am going to read all the parts in this series for sure!

  • Dora77 on Feb 2, 2012

    Allison,Where is the End?this is discontinued,what about my cat? she is curious to know….Will wait until u post the 5th series of this…

  • coker on Feb 9, 2012

    good to see your still on here……

  • girishpuri on Feb 15, 2012

    nice

  • Adam on Feb 17, 2012

    Just bought the book :D

  • Feysbuk on Feb 18, 2012

    its an interesting article about love !

  • Young at heart on Feb 26, 2012

    Good read. Cant wait for the next installment.

  • Liz on Mar 1, 2012

    Enjoying the story Allison, love stories are my favorite!

  • how to get a woman on Mar 22, 2012

    He must be an important guy.

  • Literary Agency Delhi on May 14, 2012

    Actually, There’s difference between love and attraction. People often misunderstood. And they rarely notice it wisely.

  • Genevieve Windsor on May 22, 2012

    I do love reading romantic stories. Though at some point I feel disappointed because not all of it has happy endings. I think in this story it tells us that don’t just use your heart every time you fall in love.

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