Comments on: Flash Fiction: Like a Virgin http://authspot.com/fan-fiction/flash-fiction-like-a-virgin/ Thu, 31 May 2012 21:47:07 -0400 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.4 hourly 1 By: jarawila http://authspot.com/fan-fiction/flash-fiction-like-a-virgin/comment-page-1/#comment-1709651 jarawila Wed, 08 Jun 2011 05:50:02 +0000 http://authspot.com/fan-fiction/flash-fiction-like-a-virgin/#comment-1709651 I FULLY understand what transpired. This is POWERFUL writing. I FULLY understand what transpired. This is POWERFUL writing.

]]> By: RoeHill http://authspot.com/fan-fiction/flash-fiction-like-a-virgin/comment-page-1/#comment-1631165 RoeHill Wed, 23 Mar 2011 00:26:32 +0000 http://authspot.com/fan-fiction/flash-fiction-like-a-virgin/#comment-1631165 Nice erotic tale! Nice erotic tale!

]]> By: journalistmarlene http://authspot.com/fan-fiction/flash-fiction-like-a-virgin/comment-page-1/#comment-1247135 journalistmarlene Mon, 12 Apr 2010 19:04:11 +0000 http://authspot.com/fan-fiction/flash-fiction-like-a-virgin/#comment-1247135 "Her blouse was open." "Her breasts fully exposed." He begins to kiss her breasts. Then she takes a deep breath and arches her back. You let the reader visualize every little detail and leaving everything else to their imagination. Excellent work. “Her blouse was open.” “Her breasts fully exposed.” He begins to kiss her breasts. Then she takes a deep breath and arches her back. You let the reader visualize every little detail and leaving everything else to their imagination. Excellent work.

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