Seung Mina finds love awakened from an unexpected source. A Mina and Hwang Romance.

Author’s Notes: This one-shot is based on Seung Mina’s ending in the original Soul Calibur had she found and destroyed Soul Edge. Also, I am using the Korean characters original name spelling before Soul Calibur III came out for continuity sake.

Disclaimer: I do not own Mina, Hwang, Soul Calibur, etc. They all belong to Namco.

I did it! Mina thought triumphantly, as she watched the last embers of Inferno – Soul Edge incarnate – burn out into the sky. The “Sword of Salvation” turned out to be evil and she had destroyed it. She felt the cool breeze on her face as a smile of satisfaction curled upon her lips. Her training with Master Kong had paid off. Now father will respect me and stop treating me like a child, she thought. And Hwang and I will be equals now. I won’t just be my father’s daughter anymore. For so long, she wanted Hwang to see her as a worthy opponent. Whenever they trained together he had always went easy on her, and that infuriated her. He would always say that she was his master’s daughter, too precious to touch. Any man who did would die. But now he would see that she wasn’t some porcelain doll who needed coddling. She had defeated Inferno! And without any help, too! Hwang would now surely realize…

Mina suddenly felt very weak and tired. Her vision blurred, and her entire body went limp as she felt herself falling…falling backwards. She closed her eyes and steeled herself for the hard impact to come. But there was no hard crash, no pain. All she felt was the warmth of another human soul as well-muscled arms engulfed her petite frame. They had such strength and power, but also gentleness and tenderness as well. She felt so safe and secure…so protected. They also felt familiar, like she was held like this before. By someone she knew, someone she loved. And then she heard a man’s voice…

Mina… Mina…

It felt like soft caresses whispered in her ear. Oh so very soft…

Mina… Mina… MINA…

Now it felt liked she was being kissed all over her face…

MINA… MINA… MINA!!!

He sounded so desperate and frantic…

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  • Papa Sparks on Oct 4, 2009

    I liked this a lot. I was particularly impressed with the way that you developed the story as well as your attention to detail. The language is quite descriptive and you have “shown” us not “told” us the story. Please use exclamation points sparingly, though. There are other ways to show emphasis or surprise.

    This read quite well.

    Nicely done.

  • agriculi on Oct 4, 2009

    It is a very well written story. Well done. One thing thing you have to be aware of is that you change the tense a couple of times. You write in the past tense and than you use the present tense. If you ever want to publish you must either write in the past tense or present. Only well established writers get away with a combination. When people talk then you use the present tense. “What’s up doc?” Mina asked.

  • ken bultman on Oct 4, 2009

    It was a beautiful, well told story and the ending was perfect. To thine own self be true.

  • Lostash on Oct 4, 2009

    Very sweet! I think Namco should employ you!

  • deep blue on Oct 4, 2009

    Very well written, no comment. You may as well write the prelude and the concluding chapters. Love story, romance and martial arts always seem to be a nice mix.

  • papaleng on Oct 5, 2009

    Ah, this is the story I was following. Indeed. a very good story for a new writer to compose.

  • hosariwi on Oct 28, 2010

    Great!

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