Jeanette is recovering in the hospital and Simon is nowhere to be found. What surprise will he have in store for her when he finally shows up?

Brittany spent the night in the hospital looking after Jeanette. Alvin wanted to stay with her, but she insisted that he go home and get some sleep. He reluctantly agreed. Ellie was still upset, but Theodore insisted on taking her home. Brittany had fallen asleep in a chair in Jeanette’s room and had only been awakened by the attending nurse that came into the room.

“How is she doing?” Brittany asked, watching the nurse taking her sister’s vitals.

“She’ll be fine,” the nurse said. “All she needs is rest, so we’ve given her something to help her sleep.” The nurse looked up at Brittany. “You’re the sister, right?”

“One of them. Since our mother died it’s been just the three of us. I just don’t know what I would do if I lost her.”

“I know how you feel. I have a brother. He’s a policeman. I wonder everyday if today is the day I get the call telling me he’s… well, you know.”

“But Jeanette’s has anyways been the rational one, the careful one, the level headed one. I just never expected any of this.”

“We never do,” she said.

She soon exited the room, leaving Brittany alone with her sister. She looked so fragile, and that made Brittany feel even more guilty. If only she had taken better care of her sister. After their adoptive mother died she vowed she would always look out for her younger sisters, but she failed.

She heard footsteps coming down the hall and stop at the door to Jeanette room. She quickly turned around to see a familiar face.

“Alvin,” she , just above a whisper. “I thought I told you to go home.”

“And when do I ever listen to anyone?” his tone sarcastic.

“Good point,” she said. “So why did you come back?”

“I thought you could use a change of clothes and something to eat, since dinner got canceled.”

“Sorry about that,” she said. “But I’m glad you’re here.”

“So how’s she doing?” Alvin asked.

“She been sleeping most of the time. The nurse told me they gave her something, but earlier she was asking for Simon. Where is he, anyway? He should be here.”

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  • Jimmy Shilaho on Mar 14, 2010

    Another good story. Keep it up Alison.

  • Juancav on Mar 15, 2010

    Another exciting chapter.

  • drAnn on Mar 15, 2010

    Ah, but now we need another chapter, and then another. See what you have done?

  • babygirl3605 on May 17, 2010

    Very good

  • Alexa Broderick on Apr 10, 2012

    Nice post. Your writing style is very beautiful and your article is very attractive. You share a very useful information that is very useful for a lot of people and it will also help for many people. Keep writing. Thanks for sharing.

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