This is my take on the the X-Men Evolution episode, "Rogue Recruit." I added more detail and gave it a slightly different ending.

Here’s the original episode if anyone wants to compare my version to original.

Who Am I Now?

          “I don’t think it’s a good idea for you to go out tonight,” Irene said, as Rogue grabbed her black leather jacket ready to leave the house. “What if something happens?”

          “Aunt Irene, stop worrin’,” Rogue said as she heard a honk outside in the driveway. “Ah’ll be careful, and besides it’s just a party. What could happen?”

          “Alright, honey, but be back by curfew,” Irene said giving the girl a hug.

          “See ya later,” she said as she left the house.

“Hey, Rogue,” a dark-haired girl in a dark blue mini skirt and metallic silver top called from the car.

          “Hey, Tara,” Rogue called back walking swiftly to the car. Tara opened the back seat door for her.

          “Nice outfit,” she said, eying Rogue’s black leather mini skirt and black cotton top with string straps. “Who says Goths aren’t hot.”

          “Cut it out, Tara,” Rogue said. Tara’s boyfriend Bruno was driving. His long black hair, obviously died was tied back in the ponytail. “Are we gonna sit here all day admiring Aunt Irene’s daisies?”

          “Hell, no,” Bruno said as he slammed on the gas. Tara cranked up the volume, the song Push It by Garage was blasting through the speakers.

          “Time to party,” Tara yelled out the window as they sped off in the car. Rogue looked back at the house to see Irene standing on the porch, a concerned look on her face.

          Rogue’s expression took a more serious note, remembering all the things she and Irene had discussed over the last few years. Rogue knew she was born different, special. That’s what her mother had always told her, and that one day she would have great power. To her it seemed like a mere fairytale, some story that her mother and Aunt Irene made up.

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  • Herbal incense on Feb 18, 2012

    X-Men episode was the best. You should checkout the highlight remix done by user: xmen4ten on youtube. Great post thanks.

  • Dora77 on Feb 21, 2012

    Lovely Post….i’m still reading it though

  • Joanna Maharis on Feb 23, 2012

    Cool story so far. I look forward to reading the next chapter.

  • deaddiction on Feb 24, 2012

    Great story hm. I am waiting for reading the next chapter.

  • Laser cosmetic surgery on Feb 29, 2012

    Cool video. I looked with pleasure.

  • Carrie Lenser on Mar 2, 2012

    X-Men is my favorite, especially rogue. Wonderful telling of the episode. Love the alternate ending too. What mischief will she get into?

  • papaleng on Mar 7, 2012

    14 pages is nothing, if you are reading a very interesting piece. Good work, friend.

  • Victoria Erin on Mar 7, 2012

    I like it. Took me a bit though because I have a lil boy bugging me to get him something. Rogue is awesome.

  • A Bromley on Mar 7, 2012

    This is fantastic. I really like this and am looking forward to the next episode.

  • Tiki33 on Mar 10, 2012

    I love X-Men. please share more!

  • Vinaya says good bye on Mar 11, 2012

    You write dialogues so wonderfully.

  • MJ Taylor on Mar 12, 2012

    I don’t know a great deal on some of the Marvel crew, but what I’ve read sounds interesting. However, I was unable to view the Video for comparison. It says, it’s ‘disabled by request’

  • Alan on Mar 15, 2012

    The X-Men are fantastic, especially Wolverine.

  • Margaret Boseroy on Mar 22, 2012

    Wonderful stuff here. I got really into it.

  • Erin Miller on Apr 18, 2012

    Good story

  • Eye Hospital Jaipur on Jun 21, 2012

    Very nice article….thanks for sharing.

  • The reasons why Generic Viagra Matters Today, local drug stores on Oct 25, 2012

    That was quiet good one. Would love to see more like this in near future.

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