This is my take on the the X-Men Evolution episode, "Rogue Recruit." I added more detail and gave it a slightly different ending.

“You!” Rogue shouted, pointing a finger at the woman. “No, you won’t take me!” Rogue ran in the other direction seeing the boy with the visor try to chase after her, but he stumbled and fell in the mud.

She ran deeper into the graveyard until she found a mausoleum. It was as good as any place to hide. She went inside and hid herself behind a large sealed coffin. Even though she was alone now, she was still frightened, more by the deafening silence than any appending harm her pursuers could inflict.

Suddenly she heard a noise and looked up to see the boy with the visor come through an opening in the ceiling. He dropped down and landed on his feet. He was still a good distance away from her, but she was still huddled on the floor too scared to get up.

“Thought you could escape us, did you?” he shouted, slowly coming towards her. He smashed a large piece of pottery that was in his way. “The X-Men don’t leave loose ends.” He was still coming closer as he smashed another large vase.

Rogue backed up some more and found the strength to rise to her feet. She quickly ran out of the mausoleum, and to her surprise ran into the very person she was running from. She pushed him out of her way, which left him dazed. A bright red beam came from his eyes hitting the powers lines and causing an explosion. Rogue ran back into the mausoleum, only to run into a very angry Jean Gray.

“I tried,” Jean shouted at her. “I really did, but some people just won’t be helped.”

Jean raised her hand ready to attack, but Rogue quickly teleported away. She reappeared in midair about a foot off the ground. Startled, she fell and hit the ground.

“Are you hurt?” Rogue heard Jean Gray’s voice. Why was she being so sympathetic now? Must be a trick, Rogue thought to herself. Well, she wasn’t going to fall for that act again. “Lie still. Don’t try to move.”

Rogue was now in a sitting position. She backed up away from Jean, but soon realized that the dark-skinned woman who attacked her earlier was right behind her.

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  • Herbal incense on Feb 18, 2012

    X-Men episode was the best. You should checkout the highlight remix done by user: xmen4ten on youtube. Great post thanks.

  • Dora77 on Feb 21, 2012

    Lovely Post….i’m still reading it though

  • Joanna Maharis on Feb 23, 2012

    Cool story so far. I look forward to reading the next chapter.

  • deaddiction on Feb 24, 2012

    Great story hm. I am waiting for reading the next chapter.

  • Laser cosmetic surgery on Feb 29, 2012

    Cool video. I looked with pleasure.

  • Carrie Lenser on Mar 2, 2012

    X-Men is my favorite, especially rogue. Wonderful telling of the episode. Love the alternate ending too. What mischief will she get into?

  • papaleng on Mar 7, 2012

    14 pages is nothing, if you are reading a very interesting piece. Good work, friend.

  • Victoria Erin on Mar 7, 2012

    I like it. Took me a bit though because I have a lil boy bugging me to get him something. Rogue is awesome.

  • A Bromley on Mar 7, 2012

    This is fantastic. I really like this and am looking forward to the next episode.

  • Tiki33 on Mar 10, 2012

    I love X-Men. please share more!

  • Vinaya says good bye on Mar 11, 2012

    You write dialogues so wonderfully.

  • MJ Taylor on Mar 12, 2012

    I don’t know a great deal on some of the Marvel crew, but what I’ve read sounds interesting. However, I was unable to view the Video for comparison. It says, it’s ‘disabled by request’

  • Alan on Mar 15, 2012

    The X-Men are fantastic, especially Wolverine.

  • Margaret Boseroy on Mar 22, 2012

    Wonderful stuff here. I got really into it.

  • Erin Miller on Apr 18, 2012

    Good story

  • Eye Hospital Jaipur on Jun 21, 2012

    Very nice article….thanks for sharing.

  • The reasons why Generic Viagra Matters Today, local drug stores on Oct 25, 2012

    That was quiet good one. Would love to see more like this in near future.

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