This is my take on the the X-Men Evolution episode, "Rogue Recruit." I added more detail and gave it a slightly different ending.

She quickly unlocked the door and walked into the house. It was dark, but by some instinct she knew exactly where the light switch was. She had never been here. She knew she hadn’t, but somehow she knew this place. She felt a growling in her stomach and walked straight for the kitchen. She went straight for the cupboard over the sink where her favorite snack bars were hidden behind some dishes. Wait, she thought to herself. I don’t even like granola bars, do I?

She took one out and returned the box to its hiding place. She unwrapped the tasty snack and took a bite, then headed for the stairs. My room, she thought. She felt suddenly tired and wanted to lie down. She walked down to the end of the hallway and opened the last door. She peeked inside first. It looked familiar, but was it? She walked inside studying the room. It felt like her room, but it couldn’t have been. This was more a boy’s room, and she wasn’t a boy.

There were sports posters hanging on the wall and a glass case on the far side by the closet filled with trophies. There was a metal wire mess basket full of different sporting balls: a basketball, a football and even a soccer ball. She noticed a basketball hoop opposite the bed which had brown and red sheets. She looked over at the dresser and noticed all the pictures sticking out at the ends of the glass mirror. It was Cody in many of the pictures. A few showed him with his teammates and friends, a few with girls. They must have been old girlfriends, she thought. One stuck out more than the others. Cody was standing next a kid, who looked to be a younger version of himself, and in the back stood two older people, a man and woman. It was a family picture. She pulled it out and studied it.

“This is me?” she questioned. “This is mine.” She looked around the room again. No, it can’t be. She shook her head, knowing this couldn’t be true.

Suddenly she heard a noise coming from downstairs. Something wasn’t right. She was about to go and investigate when someone or something came bursting through the door. Rogue was in a panicked state, but not so much so that would have been frozen in her place. She readied herself for a fight.

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  • Herbal incense on Feb 18, 2012

    X-Men episode was the best. You should checkout the highlight remix done by user: xmen4ten on youtube. Great post thanks.

  • Dora77 on Feb 21, 2012

    Lovely Post….i’m still reading it though

  • Joanna Maharis on Feb 23, 2012

    Cool story so far. I look forward to reading the next chapter.

  • deaddiction on Feb 24, 2012

    Great story hm. I am waiting for reading the next chapter.

  • Laser cosmetic surgery on Feb 29, 2012

    Cool video. I looked with pleasure.

  • Carrie Lenser on Mar 2, 2012

    X-Men is my favorite, especially rogue. Wonderful telling of the episode. Love the alternate ending too. What mischief will she get into?

  • papaleng on Mar 7, 2012

    14 pages is nothing, if you are reading a very interesting piece. Good work, friend.

  • Victoria Erin on Mar 7, 2012

    I like it. Took me a bit though because I have a lil boy bugging me to get him something. Rogue is awesome.

  • A Bromley on Mar 7, 2012

    This is fantastic. I really like this and am looking forward to the next episode.

  • Tiki33 on Mar 10, 2012

    I love X-Men. please share more!

  • Vinaya says good bye on Mar 11, 2012

    You write dialogues so wonderfully.

  • MJ Taylor on Mar 12, 2012

    I don’t know a great deal on some of the Marvel crew, but what I’ve read sounds interesting. However, I was unable to view the Video for comparison. It says, it’s ‘disabled by request’

  • Alan on Mar 15, 2012

    The X-Men are fantastic, especially Wolverine.

  • Margaret Boseroy on Mar 22, 2012

    Wonderful stuff here. I got really into it.

  • Erin Miller on Apr 18, 2012

    Good story

  • Eye Hospital Jaipur on Jun 21, 2012

    Very nice article….thanks for sharing.

  • The reasons why Generic Viagra Matters Today, local drug stores on Oct 25, 2012

    That was quiet good one. Would love to see more like this in near future.

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