This is my take on the the X-Men Evolution episode, "Rogue Recruit." I added more detail and gave it a slightly different ending.

“Who?” Rogue asked still confused. “Wait…” She hesitated for moment, trying to clear her thoughts. “Aunt Irene. Yes, but I’m so confused, strange thoughts in my head, people chasing me.”

“Easy, honey,” her aunt said, trying to soothe her. “The police are coming. The X-Men will not risk a confrontation.”

“The X-Men?” she questioned. She heard that word before, trying to place it. Yes, the guy with the claws mentioned the X-Men. She was trembling with fear at the name.

“Yes,” Irene said. “Mutant hunters.” Irene helped Rogue to her feet. “I have a friend who can help you. I’ll take you to her.”

Rogue felt a little more relieved, but still she was apprehensive. “All this is happening so fast. Ah don’t…” Rogue looked up to see three beings coming towards them. One of them was the guy with the claws. He was heading the group. There was also a girl of about fifteen with brown hair in a ponytail and a blue demonic-looking creature. Fear struck her again seeing that man. “It’s him.” She pointed in his direction. “The one who attacked me. Run, Irene, run!”

Rogue ran off in the opposite direction of her pursuers, but one of her gloves came off.

“That’s gotta be her!” Wolverine shouted as they continued their pursuit.

“Please, leave me be,” she pleaded.

She quickly climbed over a wooden fence to get away.  Rogue found herself in backyard of a local residence. She wasn’t worried about getting caught trespassing, although she should have been. She was alone again. The voice of Cody inside her head had faded away, and all she could hear was the faint sounds of the night.

Suddenly Rogue had the feeling like she wasn’t alone. She looked up to see a boy not much younger than her sitting on a swing. “Guten Tag, Fräulein.” He spoke in German. “Please, don’t be frightened,” he said in English with his German accent. He teleported from his place on the swing to the water fountain Rogue was standing next to.

“What do ya want?” she asked him in an agitated voice.

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  • Herbal incense on Feb 18, 2012

    X-Men episode was the best. You should checkout the highlight remix done by user: xmen4ten on youtube. Great post thanks.

  • Dora77 on Feb 21, 2012

    Lovely Post….i’m still reading it though

  • Joanna Maharis on Feb 23, 2012

    Cool story so far. I look forward to reading the next chapter.

  • deaddiction on Feb 24, 2012

    Great story hm. I am waiting for reading the next chapter.

  • Laser cosmetic surgery on Feb 29, 2012

    Cool video. I looked with pleasure.

  • Carrie Lenser on Mar 2, 2012

    X-Men is my favorite, especially rogue. Wonderful telling of the episode. Love the alternate ending too. What mischief will she get into?

  • papaleng on Mar 7, 2012

    14 pages is nothing, if you are reading a very interesting piece. Good work, friend.

  • Victoria Erin on Mar 7, 2012

    I like it. Took me a bit though because I have a lil boy bugging me to get him something. Rogue is awesome.

  • A Bromley on Mar 7, 2012

    This is fantastic. I really like this and am looking forward to the next episode.

  • Tiki33 on Mar 10, 2012

    I love X-Men. please share more!

  • Vinaya says good bye on Mar 11, 2012

    You write dialogues so wonderfully.

  • MJ Taylor on Mar 12, 2012

    I don’t know a great deal on some of the Marvel crew, but what I’ve read sounds interesting. However, I was unable to view the Video for comparison. It says, it’s ‘disabled by request’

  • Alan on Mar 15, 2012

    The X-Men are fantastic, especially Wolverine.

  • Margaret Boseroy on Mar 22, 2012

    Wonderful stuff here. I got really into it.

  • Erin Miller on Apr 18, 2012

    Good story

  • Eye Hospital Jaipur on Jun 21, 2012

    Very nice article….thanks for sharing.

  • The reasons why Generic Viagra Matters Today, local drug stores on Oct 25, 2012

    That was quiet good one. Would love to see more like this in near future.

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