This is my take on the the X-Men Evolution episode, "Rogue Recruit." I added more detail and gave it a slightly different ending.

“To help you,” he said, his voice was sympathetic. She was still skeptical of his intensions, but she would at least hear him out. “We’re the good guys, especially me. I was like you once. Alone, unsure of what I was, afraid to show my face. Can you believe it?”

Rogue kept a straight face, hoping this kid was being sincere. She turned and saw a girl with brown hair standing by the tall wooden fence that she had climbed over not so long ago.

“She doesn’t look so tough to me,” she faintly heard the girl say. Kitty came towards them which startled Rogue.

Kurt saw the fear in her and eyes and shouted, “Kitty, no!”

Kitty grabbed onto Rogue forcing her to the ground. Rogue easily escaped Kitty’s grasp as Kurt approached them. This was an ambush. Well, Rogue figured that they wouldn’t get her without a fight. In an attempt to get away she hit Kurt’s watch. Something strange happened after that. The image of a normal-looking human boy faded away and in its place stood a blue demon with yellow eyes and a long tail. He was the creature who was with the guy with the steel claws. This was all a ploy to get to her.

He grabbed into her, trying to stop her from getting away. In the struggle she touched his face. Suddenly new images and memories invaded her mind, but there was something different this time. Rogue stepped back. All she wanted was to get away, and suddenly she disappeared into a puff of smoke.

The next thing she knew she was in a graveyard. “What just happened?” she asked herself out loud. “Where am I?” Rogue took in her surroundings. She couldn’t fathom how this could have happened. The graveyard was a few miles away, so how did she wind up here? “Ich speche deutsch. I can speak German?” She thought for a moment. “The fuzzy one… Kurt, ah’m him, like ah was Cody. I think ah’m catchin’ on now. But how did ah…”

Suddenly Rogue was teleporting all over the graveyard, and for the first time since the traumatic incident with Cody she was actually having fun, but the feeling of joy only lasted for a few minutes. On her last teleport she reappeared a few inches off the ground and ended up falling on the ground. 

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  • Herbal incense on Feb 18, 2012

    X-Men episode was the best. You should checkout the highlight remix done by user: xmen4ten on youtube. Great post thanks.

  • Dora77 on Feb 21, 2012

    Lovely Post….i’m still reading it though

  • Joanna Maharis on Feb 23, 2012

    Cool story so far. I look forward to reading the next chapter.

  • deaddiction on Feb 24, 2012

    Great story hm. I am waiting for reading the next chapter.

  • Laser cosmetic surgery on Feb 29, 2012

    Cool video. I looked with pleasure.

  • Carrie Lenser on Mar 2, 2012

    X-Men is my favorite, especially rogue. Wonderful telling of the episode. Love the alternate ending too. What mischief will she get into?

  • papaleng on Mar 7, 2012

    14 pages is nothing, if you are reading a very interesting piece. Good work, friend.

  • Victoria Erin on Mar 7, 2012

    I like it. Took me a bit though because I have a lil boy bugging me to get him something. Rogue is awesome.

  • A Bromley on Mar 7, 2012

    This is fantastic. I really like this and am looking forward to the next episode.

  • Tiki33 on Mar 10, 2012

    I love X-Men. please share more!

  • Vinaya says good bye on Mar 11, 2012

    You write dialogues so wonderfully.

  • MJ Taylor on Mar 12, 2012

    I don’t know a great deal on some of the Marvel crew, but what I’ve read sounds interesting. However, I was unable to view the Video for comparison. It says, it’s ‘disabled by request’

  • Alan on Mar 15, 2012

    The X-Men are fantastic, especially Wolverine.

  • Margaret Boseroy on Mar 22, 2012

    Wonderful stuff here. I got really into it.

  • Erin Miller on Apr 18, 2012

    Good story

  • Eye Hospital Jaipur on Jun 21, 2012

    Very nice article….thanks for sharing.

  • The reasons why Generic Viagra Matters Today, local drug stores on Oct 25, 2012

    That was quiet good one. Would love to see more like this in near future.

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