Nothing says “I love you” like being snowed in together for 10 days and living to tell the tale.

The first day of snow was magical. My husband and I smiled together over hot chocolate and marshmallows in the late morning and chatted lightly about how beautiful the fresh snow was as it cascaded through the crisp morning air and coated our cars with several inches of soft powder. We spent the day lounging in our pajamas, working sporadically from our laptops but generally goofing off in the true fashion of any snow-day. We had a couple of snowball fights and laughed as our 100 pound dog bounded through the fluffy drifts like a springy bunny rabbit. It was bliss. For a time.

The magic began to rub off around day three of the snowfall. Our neighborhood roads were almost impassable, and our employers were becoming less tolerant of our missing work. We were running low on hot chocolate (and by then we were low on wine as well) and our tolerance for each other was growing slim.

By day five, the aforementioned dog decided that the snow was too deep to trudge through in order to find a place to relieve himself, so he began wetting on the doorstep and then wanting immediately back in the house without wiping his soiled paws. It started to become more difficult to get so far as the mailbox, and although the grocery store is a mere four blocks from our house we weren’t able to get the cars out of the driveway and four blocks became too far to walk with snow a foot deep.

The morning of Day Seven should have ended with homicide, or divorce. I am amazed that we survived that day in-tact between arguments about who ate the last bowl of cereal, and how annoying it was to one of us when the other insisted on breathing. There was one close call that involved an ice-cream scoop and a toilet plunger of which I am sworn to secrecy except to say, “I am but a mere woman mortal, and my husband is the All Knowing god of Knowledge”.

As the two feet of snow and ice began to break up on day ten, we rejoiced and vowed to go separate directions and fought our way to our respective offices. The bliss of being at work, away from the house and away from my husband was almost too much to bear. The beautiful silence emanating through my workspace was broken by a familiar ring-tone. I picked up and heard my husband speak on the other end of the line, “I cannot tell you how nice it is to not be sitting next to you right now, not looking into your eyes or listening to the beating of your heart. I love you.” And I felt the exact same way.

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  • Marge on Jan 3, 2009

    That was a great story couldn’t have told it better myself!

  • Charles on Jan 3, 2009

    Great story. I’ve had one of those days before, in one of my past relationships as well. It is sheer bliss being away from them by day 10.

  • Calvin on Jan 3, 2009

    Brilliant! As a child i never understood why our father hated the snow so much. Now as a working adult, I completely understand. I would love to hear more about the ice cream scoop, and plunger incident. Great job on this one!

  • kelly on Jan 3, 2009

    very funny have to go back to work would mention lol moments but cant
    nonetheless snow sucks

  • Breton on Jan 3, 2009

    GLORIOUS!!! i ate this right up, chicken soup for the soul fer sure. i wish i was snowed in with someone.
    god speed in your writing endevors!
    you are equipped with talent unlike the philistinism of the masses!

  • Joe on Jan 3, 2009

    Ah yes, Winter in Western Oregon. I love the snow (in pictures only).
    Your article is very well written! You have real talent and should continue expressing yourself with words. You brought back memories of snowed in days. The thing I do like is how quiet everything is with an insulating layer of snow, and no cars able to get around. Very peaceful.

  • Amy on Jan 4, 2009

    This is very well written, with a lot of personality. I can tell that you really put yourself into this one. I enjoyed reading about your dog, and found the “nothing” fights quite humorous. I look forward to reading your future work.

  • Kendra on Jan 4, 2009

    Wonderful! and so true. You have a talent for writing, that I envy. I wish you well in all of your writing endevours.

  • trinity969 on Jan 4, 2009

    Excellent story. I can see that happening. Keep up the writing.

  • Vicki on Jan 4, 2009

    Great story! Glad you made it out of the house finally, marriage intact. :)

  • Ginger on Jan 4, 2009

    I caught myself laughing aloud by day three (and then again and again as it progressed). Yes, you DO have a delightful talent for writing, and you should continue. It was a pleasure to read an eye witness account rather than just hear what the TV news called a snow storm. Your depiction made it so much more. I am glad you and your husband finished with smiles and a love message!

  • Denise Kawaii on Jan 4, 2009

    Thank you all so much for the great comments on my very first article. This experiment has been fun, and I look forward to continuing to write again. A big thanks to each of you for your support – it was the push that I needed to start putting pen to paper again!

  • Elizabeth M on Jan 5, 2009

    I COMPLETELY related (less the ice cream scoop & plunger situation). Isn’t nice that we can all smile about it after it is over?! Job well done on your writing! Thanks for making me smile!

  • Joni Keith on Jan 7, 2009

    Funny that I should read this story today. It just started to snow here but only about an inch so far. Snow days are great one at a time. Too much of anything, even those we love, can get to be too much. I love the humor of your story.

  • denus on Jan 7, 2009

    Two words to describe it :
    excellently excellent:)

    cheers,
    denus

  • Mercedes Selvira on Jan 7, 2009

    Wonderful story! Clearly, you know how to tell them :)

  • Bren Parks on Jan 8, 2009

    LOL!!!Loved it…

    My man is laid off right now so I can relate…I told him he is like a caged lion…

  • Lorna Dykstra on Jan 9, 2009

    I come from a country where it never snows. So for me, snow is all about romance and fun. Your story made me realise that there is a down side to it and that maybe I should appreciate the many sunny days we have here. It was a great read. Thank you.

  • Bick Parker on Jan 11, 2009

    Enjoyable read. I visualised that poor dog’s expression finding no regular ‘wee area’, and having to do it on the doorstep! It made me think of Scooby Doo.

    Looking forward to reading more of your work in due time. Happy writing!

  • William L Domme on Jan 12, 2009

    …”how annoying it was to one of us when the other insisted on breathing.”

    perfect. 10+. Very jealous, wish I had written it.

  • Erin Cree on Mar 3, 2009

    So good, I love it

  • clay hurtubise on Apr 13, 2009

    lol, sure sounds like a Maine winter to me! Great story telling.
    Thanks,
    Clay

  • kate smedley on May 5, 2009

    Very enjoyable read, can’t believe this was only your first piece, it’s excellent!

  • Kimber777 on May 6, 2009

    Amazing for sure story! Thanks for sharing!

  • Bo Russo on May 9, 2009

    That was great Denise,it will never happen here though.

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