Real story.

a couple of days ago, my mum drank poison and didnt spoke about it to anyone of my sisters.

the reason she did that is because my shit hole so called dad likes to suspects that my mum is having an affair, but thats not true at all. he’ll use vulgar words and beat her up sometimes, even me and my sisters.

recently, he left the house for almost three weeks but every night he’ll come and stalk my mum.

that night, he came and made some some bull crap stories about she with another man and talked really bad. the even took away her phone so that she wouldnt call anyone.

she couldnt stand the pain anymore, so drank a bottle of poison and acted as if nothing happened. suddenly, sh easked my little sister to fetch my aunt who living in the next apartment. she wanted to go to the hospital.

but the moment my sister left the house, my mum who was sitting on the sofa fell down and started to scream. her eyes where looking up. i screamed and yelled for help. i ran out of the house and called my so called neighbours for help but no one came( i live in an apartment). i ran back inside and called 999 to send in an ambulance but the stupid operator kept on asking what happened. i hung up and sat near her. i didnt know what to do.i just fell like maybe its time for her to move on and sat next to her. she looked straight into my eyes and i felt so sorry for myself. i dont know what came into me…i quickly did CPR and when i forced in some air, i could hear sound like there’s something inside her lungs. i kept doing that. at one point, she didnt let me to give air.i placed my fingers in her mouth and opened it wide. but, she shut ther mouth. i ran out and saw alot of people standing outside my house. i asked them for help but they just stood there. my aunt’s daughter rushed and called for ambulance while and aunt entered into the house. there was a chinese man outside my house who stood holding his car keys.i asked him to bring my mum to the hospital but you know what he said, ” i dont mind but i scared if problems come to me” i was so pissed. there was this indian man wearing only towel; i’m guessing he was in his shower. he told the man, ” you just start the car, if any problem comes, we’ll handle it.” but the ass chinese guy kept saying no…

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  • CHIPMUNK on Jan 27, 2011

    great share

  • youthinksokiddo on Jan 27, 2011

    good thing she was okay

  • UncleSammy on Jan 27, 2011

    A very good one- thanks for sharing

  • The Quail 1957 on Jan 27, 2011

    Moving story, I think if violence is or was involved the law should have been called long before it got out of hand and he should have been removed.

  • khalida on Jan 27, 2011

    i can’t believe there are so many people who just sit and stare and do nothing in times of crisis for others!

    am glad your mom is okay now. take care :)

  • jemialbert on Jan 27, 2011

    grt post

  • quiet voice on Jan 27, 2011

    What an awful thing to have happen but with a great ending that she is alive. Thank goodness.

  • AnglaHodge on Jan 27, 2011

    Wonderful for you to vent. This is so sad and harsh. The real world is not so kind most times. The few that are kind and truly caring are angels. Keep writing. Practice makes perfect. Great post.

  • adventures on Jan 27, 2011

    very nice article thanks for sharing.

  • LJ Spain on Jan 28, 2011

    I am so sorry to hear that you and your family are going through such an awful life. I will be praying for you and your mom. Is there any way that you and your mom can get away from your dad. He sounds like a monster, and you and your mom deserve better than that. If there is any shelter or spouse abuse center shelter where you can go, they will protect you and help you to get straightened out and your dad will not be allowed to be there. I had to stay at one once with my daughter. They are very good to you and they give you a room and just ask that you help do the things they have to do each day to keep the upkeep. Like cooking, cleaning, etc. I wish the best for you, and anytime you need to talk about it, you can send me a message and we can talk. Okay. God bless you and your family, but please get away from him before one of you becomes a fatality. Ask organizations for help. Keep asking until you are satisfied. You need to feel safe and have peace of mind. Let me know how things are going.

  • merlinjh on Jan 28, 2011

    Thanks she is okay!

  • tonywriter on Jan 28, 2011

    Thanks for sharing ,god bless her

  • justaka on Jan 28, 2011

    It’s such a moving story.. It’s even hard to believe that such things can happen to someone, because we mostly watch them only on tv..

  • UncleSammy on Jan 28, 2011

    nice share – thanks

  • Judy Sheldon on Jan 29, 2011

    How sad that she felt it necessary to take poison. No one should ever feel that desperate. I am glad that she is getting help, and you need help too to have gone through such a terrible ordeal. You are so strong to have been there for her. God bless, and you have my prayers.

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