No one is loyal except my Lord.

Last night,when I opened my sword to ink the chest of dairy for writing my daily routine.All my life scenes were revolving in front of my somber eyes.I contemplated on myself,with shame my head bent and train of tears rolled down my cheeks that how people swallowed me.It is shame and my pride is smashed that I had been betrayed and deceived for thousand times but still I trust everyone.Man learn from experience and mistakes he make.I accustomed lot of troublemakers,thugs and bandits who robbed my gasp but learnt nothing from them.Some of my fellows said you open doors for others and they do what they want and I say I never did and do,they beg and prove them self as innocent as angel that I have to let them inside my world then after that I get to know they are demon in real.Every single tear that I shed,they will have to pay because as you sow so shall you reap.Ah!this is about me.

Some girls are solitude and even in crowd they feel alone,like me.They start to follow and believe as someone talk affably with them although they know,every other person who shakes hand is not friend and these girls by trusting those devils ruin there lives.

Some girls are in quest for life partners or I can say king of heart and these angelic princess are often fooled and bonds come to end on bed because they trust by not even conforming who the hell is he.Then blame there fate and cry.If spirited then they start to write poetry to hide in between silence of poetry like me otherwise think  to suicide that I used to and some commit this insane act that I’ll never do.I’m not brave but I keep hopes.

Some girls are adventurous,they think not to look for future,just ponder on present and love everyone like loving Ice-cream in winter.In real they don’t know this love will be the reason for them to cry whole day and night long when people will deceive them.

Some girls are gullible aha! now in between them you can see me standing,scratching my head that who is going to come to thug me,just satire!Gullible this title was first conferred to me by my English teacher when I was 14.Sorry, again I grabbed myself in,so these type of girls are piece of cake to deceive and they realise to hold the rope of their life when milk is spilled or crows snatch their lunch,I mean when they are plundered by every mean.

Some girls are crazy about their fortune and they think that fate will always do as they will direct but in real they are forgetting that fate rules life not people leading fate.These girls once lose hopes after betrayed then they stop believing on fate and life but still rely on every alien because as I told they are mad as hatter.

Some girls are as obstinate as mule so even though they know a guy or their close friend is nothing but body of lies and will leave after getting his/her work done but these kind of girls does `not take any action that if I’m going to leave my boy friend,friend or someone dear so memories linked with them will prick and will not let me live so they keep the relation alive and when people play tricks eventually, they cry by sitting in corner and open the bag of memories that really hurts:(

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  • Martin Kloess on Nov 16, 2011

    who made that quote famous.

  • CutezSoNia on Nov 16, 2011

    like it!

  • ImKarn23 on Nov 16, 2011

    some girls are gloomy, but deep..
    well done.

  • Profit Buzz on Nov 16, 2011

    Is that a personal feeling. I am sorry

  • nurzaira on Nov 16, 2011

    so gloomy, but well written

  • Scarix on Nov 16, 2011

    if so?Thanks for the share

  • aisha jamal on Nov 16, 2011

    aroosa may be i should or not but as i know you personally there is one advice 4 u n u r free to follow or ignore!
    just remember one thing when secret told to anyone that doesn`t remains secret! now its their choice to whom they tell or not .
    even if there isn`t but try to find fault in yourself i bet you will live a much happier life! ( islam quoted this too). try to do something good rather then critizing (as u r pasimist ) you`ll really feel peace. I know it`s very difficult but try to betray your feelingd i mean if u r unhappy think of something good so u can be happy . May God bless u with brighter and happier future (ameeeen)

  • lovinglyoursjuny on Nov 16, 2011

    I like this one…thanks for sharing…it’s cute “flirting with faith” :p

  • Aroosa Gloomy on Nov 16, 2011

    Thankx @aisha for blessing.

  • FX777222999 on Nov 16, 2011

    Just motivating yourself to release the gloomy side of your life.

  • misterdd on Nov 16, 2011

    I will say this. I do not believe that fate decides about our live. If there is a fate: fate just brings possible reality, but we ourselves choose the path, and every decision we make, our life is different. in life is important to know that you have right, and then think about what is best for you, everything else is less important, if you do good things. If you’re happy, then all people must be happy for you. Such is my attitude

  • marqjonz on Nov 16, 2011

    Excellent poem in prose.

  • Aroosa Gloomy on Nov 16, 2011

    @misterdd ya honey I know deeds make man and I damn believe this but fate also lead us this is also true.@marqjonz dear it’s not poem.

  • Aroosa Gloomy on Nov 16, 2011

    Triond team denied to relocate my this article plzz help me to relocate on society relations.

  • JMorgan071 on Nov 16, 2011

    Very well written, I’ll help with the relocation too.

  • treesaro on Nov 16, 2011

    nice photos

  • straw1979 on Nov 16, 2011

    I like it

  • Yvhes P. on Nov 16, 2011

    Go girl! Nicely done!

  • pattiann on Nov 16, 2011

    Good writing. Interesting topic,

  • thetoplad on Nov 16, 2011

    great post

  • megamatt09 on Nov 16, 2011

    Great stuff

  • TheTrax4 on Nov 16, 2011

    It’s good, interesting, and i like your title.

  • Ruby Hawk on Nov 16, 2011

    Go out there girl, and do your thing. Don’t cry over spilt milk. There are plenty of fish in the sea.

  • ilikep2s on Nov 17, 2011

    awesome writing, good work =)

  • beingwell on Nov 17, 2011

    Nice one.

  • ittech on Nov 17, 2011

    awesome liked it

  • kumaranasan on Nov 17, 2011

    nice share .. thanxx

  • mdrkarim7 on Nov 17, 2011

    Well… what to say.. Wait and see.

  • naruto100 on Nov 17, 2011

    Good one..

  • ayeshar on Nov 17, 2011

    It is true that it is only Our Lord that who truly loves us. “Verily in the Remembrance of Allah do hearts find rest”

    @Aroosa, you have asked about relocation of your article. i recently read this interesting article by stine1 on how to relocate your own article, maybe this would help: Why you should Flag your own articles It says that when stine1 emailed Triond for relocation of one of her articles, Triond denied her request. Then she flagged her own article that she wanted to relocate as “wrong category” and the article was moved to her desired category by Triond.

  • Vicky247 on Nov 17, 2011

    Excellent Share No doubt Thanks……….

  • Jay F. Samson on Nov 17, 2011

    Wow, nice Gloom =)

  • holly the chef on Nov 17, 2011

    I really liked this post. It was well thought out.

  • marqjonz on Nov 17, 2011

    I flagged it as wrong category for you. I hope you get it moved.

  • rgreenfield on Nov 18, 2011

    very interesting… thanks for sharing.

  • Eliza26 on Nov 18, 2011

    I agree with most of this. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us!

  • AmosTheCat on Nov 18, 2011

    Aroosa, you bare your soul with abandon. Most of us appreciate it because it is something we all are afraid to do. But, it also makes you vulnerable to those who would take advantage of your youth, inexperience, honesty, openness, etc. Tell me I worry too much if you will, and I do, my two daughters will attest to that. Be brave. but be careful.

  • CutezSoNia on Nov 19, 2011

    very interesting…

  • bolive on Nov 19, 2011

    good luck! stay out of the gloomy side.

  • KittyK on Nov 20, 2011

    Believe in yourself and never doubt your decisions. It was not meant to be….

  • tonyleather on Nov 20, 2011

    Interesting views

  • Angelji on Nov 20, 2011

    so many guys out there ,don’t waste for those who don’t deserved you..he will let you cry one ,twice sooner it will be for ever..

  • ahmed11227 on Nov 21, 2011

    thanks for the contribution

  • sjindal1121 on Nov 22, 2011

    Super like….

  • Ideahub on Nov 23, 2011

    Excellent Job

  • girishpuri on Nov 23, 2011

    Aroosa , good piece of writing , The writer truely deserves hugs , when readers feel it happened with writer , Kudos , keep it up , good piece of inspiring writing.

  • Aroosa Gloomy on Nov 23, 2011

    @girishpuric come and have free hug lol

  • rizkiandreas on Nov 23, 2011

    very interesting article, I really liked it,,

  • kelbix on Nov 24, 2011

    thanks for sharing the feelings.

  • stonecutter on Nov 28, 2011

    nice work.

  • sheilanewton on Nov 28, 2011

    Wow! When you talked about ‘opening a bag of memories that hurt’ it made me think that we all have hurtful memories. Best to let them all out just like you did here. Well done Aroosa. Fabulous piece.

  • juliachild on Dec 22, 2011

    Very nice

  • girishpuri on Dec 23, 2011

    i like it

  • blogdoit on Dec 25, 2011

    i like this..

  • realityspeaks on Jan 5, 2012

    Thoughtful perspective

  • ebasearticles on Feb 15, 2012

    really like Like Me

  • dodolbete on Mar 16, 2012

    It’s amazing to learn that someone from this computer era is still writing diary. That’s cool! While the song reminds me of those songs in Dance Revolution series. Cool! ^_^

  • VV on Mar 29, 2012

    loved the title…

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