Immediately after I realized he pointed the gun straight at me, I started to run for safety. It was me there and it was for real.

I wanted to know what it was. I turned my hand and found that it was a watch. As I took it closer to my eyes it automatically increased the sound of ticking. It looked good. Everything was orange and I could see the time easily. The time was about 3.00.

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The woman was going away. I didn’t know why but I wanted to ask about something. So I ran after her. Outside I saw there was no road in the direction she went. All was gravel on the way. Then far ahead were some houses which looked familiar. Then there was a road between those houses.

I went there and looked for her. I found some men standing here and there. The man far behind me was pointing his hand almost at me, and showing that to another man. Then I looked straight thinking it was not me. There were several men moving, but I didn’t find anybody who was steady. One man before me moved to the right side and then I saw one person who looked familiar.

I felt I didn’t like the guy. His face was round and he looked heavy though young. He wore round shaped spectacles. He was pointing a revolver straight at me. Immediately after I realized he pointed the gun straight at me, I started to run for safety. The man to my right side showed a gesture indicating I should run to the street to the right.

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I was quick to start the run as I realized he had shot a bullet. I could hear the sound as I went to the right and escaped the bullet. I found the road was almost straight and open. I cannot walk long in the open without getting hit by the second bullet. So I wanted to take cover.

There were ruined houses to the left and also to the far right. To the right was some garbage and didn’t show a way to hide. I took the little alleyway to the left and jumped off the small wall of a ruined house. While it was giving some cover, I realized that the killer would have come to this street by now.

I went parallel to the street and suddenly found row of old houses whose roof has opening. The slanted roofs near those opens looked good for taking cover. I climbed a roof and jumped from one to another while taking cover from bullets.

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I reached the end of houses. The last house didn’t give an easy way to get down and go to the other side. To the left there was a wall on which I can walk to the end and go to the other street. It appeared like a structure that I had seen before and I realized that it was like this intentionally specifically for this time. When I reached the end of the wall, it looked to high to jump from. I didn’t know what to do. I looked and found the killer searching around the wall. Suddenly two fat guys came behind me on the same wall and one fell down quickly. I was about to push the other. Then I thought how these new guys entered the scene and how did they come up the wall which was too high.

Then the scene some how changed. I realized in the morning it was dream, but the last action looked good if it continued for more time. After writing this I had realized how much it is to write only a small scene. I had two other scenes in the same night though I don’t understand how all happened one after another. I said it was real because I was there though only mentally. I started having these action thriller dreams for a long time as I watched some action movies and played action games. Today I felt like attempting to narrate it in an article.

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  • denus on Feb 6, 2009

    this is a great story, well done.

  • Fornis on Feb 6, 2009

    denus,
    thank you very much for your comment.
    -fornls.

  • AC Hamilton III on Feb 7, 2009

    Interesting story. Keep working at it.

    AC

  • rutherfranc on Feb 8, 2009

    wow.. every boy has a dream of being James Bond one time or another.. why not go to sleep again and finish the dream, it may be the start of a spy series..

  • Fornis on Feb 8, 2009

    AC Hamilton, rutherfranc,
    Thanks for your comments. I will try more in this direction.

  • Mermush on Feb 9, 2009

    lol…i know it’s nothin funny but dude wot were thinkin before u went to bed…Like ruther said Mr. Fornls…
    OK on a serious note, it was very interesting…i felt like i was playin one of my bro’s bham bham games!

  • CHAN LEE PENG on Feb 15, 2009

    Interesting read here. Thanks.

  • Fresh Writing on Feb 26, 2009

    Hi, fornls,

    Very ‘cool’ work you have here…interesting in that you keep it fast paced but slowed down enough for the reader to catch up and stay with the speed.

    Nice job; I really like your illustrations! From what source did you get those–off the internet, or a painting canvas at home?

    See you around,

    -Fresh Writing

  • Fornis on Mar 10, 2009

    Hi Fresh Writing,

    This is first time I wrote a dream that I could remember vividly. I had another dream which should be titled “how I killed my girlfriend and escaped” recently. For the violence it had I felt bad and couldn’t write.

    I did ‘oilify’ in a photo processor on pictures that closely matched the scenes in my story.

    Thanks for your comment..

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