In my quiet moments things I reflex upon when contemplating a new relationship.

I feel like we’re locked up in prison of distance,

waiting and hoping for the day of freedom to walk into our destiny.

I look forward to our communications because it’s like a life ring of hope

and encouragement to get us through to the next step.

I dream about what life would be like with you in it,

holding me and whispering words of encouragement in my ear.

I need you to wipe away my tears including the ones internal as well as external,

most of all I need to feel like I’m your only love.

In my inner thoughts I’m sheltered, protected, and overjoyed with happiness.

I’m watching and waiting for your arrival as you consume my inner thoughts.

While trapped in my mind filled with doubt wondering silently,

how I will be able to figure this out.

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  • Atanacio on Aug 7, 2010

    a very good write Loved the flow and the second to the last line amazing!!!!

    While trapped in my mind filled with doubt wondering silently,

  • krrymarie on Aug 7, 2010

    You will find a way to figure it out! a lovely poem.

  • pearl2010 on Aug 7, 2010

    Beautiful and romantic.

  • agrant10 on Aug 7, 2010

    The narrator has placed all of their inner thoughts on paper. Nice poem.

  • Val Mills on Aug 7, 2010

    Beautiful poem saying a lot.

  • giftarist on Aug 7, 2010

    Lovely one.

  • deklin42 on Aug 7, 2010

    I like it

  • Will Dee on Aug 7, 2010

    Deep inter most feelings. Nicely stated.

  • yes me on Aug 7, 2010

    Liked this soul reaching read Terry, cheers

  • Mr. Africa on Aug 7, 2010

    I like the way you write.

  • jimbob1 on Aug 7, 2010

    Momma T…Thanks a big bunch for sharing some special, precious inner thoughts…oh to be the subject of this beautifully written, heartfelt poem…how could a person not vote that they liked this tremendous piece of literary art. You are indeed a tremendous wordsmith…thanks for the write and read…

  • Great Idea on Aug 7, 2010

    You may not consider everything you just read to be crucial information about Inner Thoughts. But don’t be surprised if you find yourself recalling and using this very information in the next few days.

  • Goodselfme on Aug 7, 2010

    This flowed from beginning to end with such purpose. I know the wisdom will come to you if this is a personal experience since you are intelligent.

  • Priyanka Bhowmick on Aug 8, 2010

    beautiful expressions.. lovely poem

  • carissimi on Aug 8, 2010

    this is a beautiful write… much hope in this.. very inspiring.!

  • Starpisces on Aug 8, 2010

    lovely…. thanks.

  • Jimmy Shilaho on Aug 8, 2010

    A lovely share, you are in a great mood.

  • LoveDoctor on Aug 8, 2010

    I can relate to this poem myself. Is this a character that you are in love with? lol. Great work Terry like usual.

  • Cynthia Bartlett on Aug 9, 2010

    very nice

  • wonder on Aug 9, 2010

    Very well composed, an effective read.Lovely expressions.

  • SharifaMcFarlane on Aug 9, 2010

    I hope you take the plunge after all the wondering :-)

  • Tina Cassello on Aug 9, 2010

    This is very good.

  • papaleng on Aug 9, 2010

    Beautiful and so romantic!

  • blacknightjar on Aug 9, 2010

    that is good :-)

  • richardpeeej on Aug 9, 2010

    Lovely write Authoress my friend-lovely way in which the words are put together-you have put much thought into this poem. -Take care,

  • S A JOHNSON on Aug 10, 2010

    Wonderful piece, I always enjoy reading your work.

  • Nosa on Aug 14, 2010

    very interesting piece!

  • mkd1788 on Aug 15, 2010

    greatly expressed..good post..

  • LOVELYHONEY on Aug 17, 2010

    u simply draw

    and

    with awe

    awesome views urs

  • Tulan on Aug 18, 2010

    that’s so romantic and lovely. We all hanker for love and acknowledgment.

  • zulfiqarali5 on Aug 31, 2010

    grt piece of ur work like it a lot dear ! thx

  • PSingh1990 on Sep 5, 2010

    Nice one….

    thanks for share.

    :-)

  • Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on Oct 16, 2010

    Undeniable.

    Thanks for sharing!

  • arunkumar25 on Dec 30, 2010

    Great work superb nice article keep it up

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