Damn, I feel so hot, too.

It was a cold Friday night. A heavy rain was stumping hard on the roof. The storm was signal number 2 according to the weather report. Everyone in the house was fast asleep except for John and his wife. John was slouching on their bed watching TV. His wife was busy in her table doing some homework reports. With eyes pressed on her laptop, she barely even noticed she had company in the room.

“Hon, stop doing that…,” he told her. His deep-seated voice seemed too soft and low because of the noise from the outside.

“Remember we have no work tomorrow…,” he teased her with a louder voice. She looked at him with grimace. He knew what that familiar look from her meant. He put a handful of popcorn in his mouth and focused on the screen. It was their favorite romantic movie they used to watch together. There was a love scene. A little while later, he felt like he wanted to do something.

“Hon…,”he called her attention.

No response. Not even a look.

“Honey, I love you…,” he teased her again. This time she looked straight through his eyes and mouthed “I love you, too honey.” He felt like he was going to melt. Every time she does that, she feels the same even after 5 years of being together as a couple.

“Hon, come here already,” he said with a soft voice. But she went back to what she was doing.

“Hon, I feel hot…,” he said with a little clue of seducing his wife.

There was no response. The sound of the crickets and frogs from the outside seemed to dominate the silence of the night. The rain had stopped. But the wind was still cold.

“Hon, I feel so hot. I’m taking off my shirts now,” he told her with a smirk showing off all his teeth. This time she looked at him and slowly stood up. With a little excitement, he took off his undergarments and threw it in front of her. It landed on the floor. She picked it up and smiled back at him.

“Finally…,” he said to himself. She took off her jacket and placed it on the side table together with his undergarments. She reached something at the back of the cabinet.

“Hon, what are you doing?” he inquired though he knew what she was reaching at.

“I thought you feel hot. I’m switching the Aircon on. Damn, I feel so hot, too,” she replied.

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Comments (19)
  • ageeinc on Jan 24, 2011

    Cute story. Good work

  • Ukrainian on Jan 24, 2011

    Interesting story. Thank you.

  • MaxBuceo on Jan 24, 2011

    Nice post, i like it

  • LJ Spain on Jan 24, 2011

    Poor guy.

  • coffeeadict on Jan 24, 2011

    Right signals, wrong response. I hope he gets one back at her next time.

  • webseowriters on Jan 24, 2011

    An interesting share buddy

  • joan retiro on Jan 24, 2011

    It shows how men and women think differently.;) I enjoyed reading this.:)

  • Moses Ingram on Jan 24, 2011

    Nice story, I liked it.

  • The Quail 1957 on Jan 24, 2011

    Opposites very often do attract even if one is feeling something the other is’nt. I enjoyed the story hopefully next time he will indeed get the desired response. Great Article…

  • Eunice Tan on Jan 24, 2011

    It is extreme is my country. The sunshine is so hot but the weather is cold.

  • LCM Linda on Jan 25, 2011

    Interesting story. Poor man.

  • papaleng on Jan 25, 2011

    parang horny story pero hindi , because it does occur. I like this one.

  • CHIPMUNK on Jan 25, 2011

    great share

  • Betty Carew on Jan 25, 2011

    I don’t think Aircon is what he had in mind Franklin. Enjoyable read.

  • mahajan on Jan 25, 2011

    great post

  • FX777222999 on Jan 25, 2011

    Different person have different personality. Thanks for sharing.

  • albert1jemi on Jan 25, 2011

    Thanks for sharing

  • Ima Vee on Jan 25, 2011

    LOL… funny story… women have a different way of thinking… :]

  • jemialbert on Jan 26, 2011

    grt share

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