This is about an entry that has been made by me in my first visit to thorpe park.

I went to Thorpe park. In Thorpe park the most scariest ride was the roller coaster. I waited for two hours and sixty minutes in the queue. There many people because it was a superb weather. Me with my elder brother, and my father sat on it. In the beginning when it went up it went very slowly, but when it went very high. I was felling a little bit scared.

My father was sitting next to me. He said not to look down. But I looked down and I saw that I was a hundred meters up then it went very fast. It looked like someone threw you from a building. Whoosh!! When it went round and round. I thought I was flying in the air and it went very fast after the ride was finished I returned home. That was the fantastic ride ever.            

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  • yo man on Mar 17, 2009

    ah this is really awesome

  • cool on Mar 18, 2009

    this is da best

  • k on Mar 18, 2009

    this the best duuuude !!!!

  • red rocker on Mar 18, 2009

    this is really good i liked it

    i think this is cooooooooool!!!!!!!!!!

    nice one
    this is the best experience of a person i have ever read about

  • Kashif on Mar 19, 2009

    I liked it Its too cool
    Its nice

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