This is about an entry that has been made by me in my first visit to thorpe park.
I went to Thorpe park. In Thorpe park the most scariest ride was the roller coaster. I waited for two hours and sixty minutes in the queue. There many people because it was a superb weather. Me with my elder brother, and my father sat on it. In the beginning when it went up it went very slowly, but when it went very high. I was felling a little bit scared.
My father was sitting next to me. He said not to look down. But I looked down and I saw that I was a hundred meters up then it went very fast. It looked like someone threw you from a building. Whoosh!! When it went round and round. I thought I was flying in the air and it went very fast after the ride was finished I returned home. That was the fantastic ride ever.
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