The first draft of the personal essay.
Most of us have all come from downtown or uptown of a city, where the streets are always busy and the sound of a hair pin dropping can’t be heard. With varieties of all types of people, running all around downtown in numbers too many to count. Hundreds or even thousands of people are rushing to work as every second passes, not even bothering to help the elders cross the street. Humanity has lost their inner sense of calmness and rich lifestyles. Haste became one of our essential aspects of our lives. Many times at religious temples or churches there are people who run in, make a quick prayer, and run out back to their daily duties. Humanity needs a rest from all of its hard work; it needs its rich lifestyle and a brief moment of calmness, if not any. Students and workers are not that different from one another in the fact that they both work from Monday to Friday. With the fact that students and workers emotionally understand each other, we can sense that the haste pit upon us from all the pressure at work affects the peace in our lives. When humanity isn’t given a rest from work, it leads to restless nights which world then lead towards drowsiness at work, due to its fast-paced environment. Many other times, our own parents are getting older and aren’t able to do what they did 20 years ago, and because of societies implantation of retirement homes, humans don’t think twice before they dump their parents at one just because we don’t have the time to take care of them; even though they had time to raise us. Humanity can’t deny it, speed has affected all of our actions and as a human, we could really use a low down button in our lives. The rapidity of life has taken the quality of resting because even family life is no longer a sanctuary from haste. With parents that give short shrift with the latest publishing fad to their children. Slowing down the society just a bit so that it’s not affecting the economy, but just enough that humans are given a chance to take rests between projects and time to do what they want not having to worry about assignments due within the hour or so. With another fact that humans have a tendency of stressing or being pressured over the smallest matters of life, and they have a short fuse when it comes to letting their anger out, but they hesitate on being polite under such circumstances. The society and its workers just need to slow down for their own health’s sake where they are given enough time to think and enjoy the richness in life. We as humans have no time to think or relate to others, or to pamper our senses. Our daily conversations have reduced to simple HI’s and byes, or simple talks over coffee because of the lack of time left for us to enjoy. Humanity just needs to balance their pace, and needs to decide which step is most beneficial to them in every situation. It’s not our fault that we have become this way, but it’s not avoidable that humans need to keep working to accomplish their rest. In conclusion, it’s recommended to keep the stabled pace in our lives in an organized fashion so that we can enjoy our rich lifestyles, and to do so, we should find hobbies that go according to our schedules. We can’t help to be patient for the day where slowness will be perfectly balanced in our lives.
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