A short writing piece.

  The sun rises over the watery horizon and casts a beam of light across the ocean. It dances on the waves before shimmering where the water meets the shore. Its sunrise at the beach, and from where I stand on the deserted boardwalk, everything is cast in a gold glow. The only sounds are the crash of the waves and the cries of the seagulls.
  I slowly begin to walk towards the endless expanse of sea, my footsteps whispers in the soft sand. I don’t stop until I reach the edge of the water. I close my eyes and focus only on the way the waves wash over my feet. The constant push and pull of the tide as it sucks at the sand around where I stand, making me slowly sink. The occasional brush from a floating piece of seaweed. The only place where I can find peace.
  But the beach won’t remain empty for long. The tourists and other sun-worshippers will arrive son, disrupting the quiet. But I have these moments now that I can hold onto until the last second. They will have to last me until my next visit. So I slowly open my eyes and look to where the sea meets the sky. If only it were a place that could be reached. But a horizon might as well be a mirage, because you can never really find it even though you see it. No matter how far you go, it will always move ahead to the last point you can see. Its own master at the everlasting escape.
  But a small bump against my toes momentarily takes my train of thought. I reach down into the water to find the source of the nudge.  There I discover a perfectly formed ring of a seashell. The waves had hollowed its middle on the journey to the beach. This will be my treasure for the day, a remembrance of the solitude. So I slip the shell into my pocket and make my way back to the now crowding boardwalk.

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  • Adelnica Amor R. Izon on Sep 16, 2010

    very relaxing piece of lit^^

  • mysocalledlife on Sep 16, 2010

    wow yolanda, reading this, i felt like i was in a trance with you! thanks for that feeling…

  • Brewed Coffee on Sep 16, 2010

    Yalonda that is a nice souvenir from a relaxing walk along the beach. I miss watching sunsets. At some point, the sunset looks like the sunrise… :-) Wonderful musings!

  • drelayaraja on Sep 16, 2010

    Lovely share ;)

  • earthlyjewels on Sep 16, 2010

    I love waking up early when we are vacationing at the beach to catch the sunrise and get a glimpse of the beach without the crowds. Your prose truly captures the moment! Thanks for posting this.

  • ishinimrod on Sep 16, 2010

    hehe :) nice

  • Jimmy Shilaho on Sep 16, 2010

    Beautiful.

  • o7Lucy on Sep 16, 2010

    Love the ocean amazing. endless.

  • carissimi on Sep 17, 2010

    lovely !

  • Alicia on Sep 17, 2010

    Your line \”Its own master at the everlasting escape.\” is just absolutely brilliant! I love that!
    And the whole concept on horizons is incredible! You are one very talented writer!

  • MilMick on Sep 18, 2010

    @@ – very touching. thanks so much for this. – @@

  • Avaxier on Sep 18, 2010

    Your words are just amazingly beautiful. I feel like I actually there enjoying the smell of fresh salt water.

  • MaxBuceo on Sep 19, 2010

    Beautiful post… i like it

  • Dee Gold on Sep 21, 2010

    lovely

  • JoeLopy on Sep 23, 2010

    I really enjoyed reading this article. Thank you.

  • Dragoonk on Sep 23, 2010

    Tht sounds beautiful. I wish I could have an experience close to that just for once.

  • LOVELYHONEY on Sep 26, 2010

    ur poetic prose is just lovely

    where ru??????

    u don’t seem to raed me

    gr8888888888888

  • Melinda J on Oct 1, 2010

    An inspirational moment. Love it!

  • R.Laws on Oct 4, 2010

    Wonderful! :-)

  • sandcastle on Oct 29, 2010

    Love it!

    I can almost feel that I am where you are in this article.

    I love the beach, hence, the pen name :)

  • LOVELYHONEY on Nov 3, 2010

    i retain a copy of the sunrise
    its beautiful did you take it?

  • Yalonda on Nov 13, 2010

    Yes Lovely Honey, I did take that photo! It was taken at Ocean City, Maryland.

  • T. S. GARP on Apr 23, 2011

    Very nice, I love spending time on the seashore, and looking out at the vastness of the ocean. This beautifully written.

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