This is an example buisness letter I once had to do for school.

North Side                                                                                                       October 28, 2009

5501 N. Kedzie Ave.
Chicago, IL 60625

 

To Whom it may concern:

 

Hi North Side, I’m ______! I’m very interested in going to your school next year. I visited your school on an Open House day and your school looks nice and clean. Everyone there behaves mature and I would like to be one of those students. Your school is famed for their accomplishments; your clubs look very tempting and won many different challenges! I would be a great asset in your school.

 

The school I am currently attending is ________. There, I am on the Student Council Board, play the clarinet (would eventually love to join your school’s great band), play volleyball, and have amazing knowledge with technology, especially with the Windows XP, Windows Vista, and Windows 7 operating systems.

 

I am bilingual in both English and Polish. I do volunteer a lot and wish to continue volunteering at North Side College Prep.  I volunteer at The Chicago Public Library as a helping librarian. I joined safety patrol at my school and help out with our Parish and Parishioners. I can continue to earn your school honor and pride because I won many art contests that gave me all first place, received Honor and High Honor Rolls, 2nd place school Science Fair winner too. As I also have mentioned I play the clarinet. I played in last year’s solo contest (my first one) and won 1st place in my School Band Solo Contest. I have attended choir for my Parish. I used to go to dance class for 8 years, and I still attend Polish School (___school name___) and plan to finish it off with great success.

 

Please do think of accepting me into your great school. I am willing to study hard, work a lot, and achieve glory for both the school and my future life.

 

Thank-you for hearing me out,

______Your Name______

 

 (Your Signature)

____________  School Student

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