Gesture of romantic finality.

                                                         All my love           Sincerely, Ken

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  • Sky Lumina on Jul 5, 2009

    a compelling letter, couldn’t take my eyes off it until i’d read it all!

  • Ramalingam on Jul 5, 2009

    Nostalgic, but as you said there is no use of opening the door that has been sealed tight long back.But I had a mixed feeling of romance and sympathy as I read your letter.Thanks for sharing, Thanks once again.

  • Hugo La Rosa on Jul 5, 2009

    That was a heartfelt letter, and tied up with the intricate choices of life and death. It’s really a sad poem.

  • Mystify on Jul 5, 2009

    Absolutely brillant!I loved the nostalgia added to this story.It was well written,creative,heartfelt,romantic,sad and last but not least funny at the end as always.Always a fan Ken,phenominal work,really enjoyed it.

  • Darla Cooke on Jul 5, 2009

    Very emotional letter.

  • ladybaby on Jul 5, 2009

    A first love never seems to go away in our mind. Maybe you might have some closure with the letters gone. Thanks for sharing such a personal memory.

  • Lostash on Jul 5, 2009

    I love your style Ken. This was a tender piece.

  • DA Cournean on Jul 5, 2009

    Sometimes things turn out for the best. But they still tug at your heart strings…

  • Cynthia Bartlett on Jul 5, 2009

    Very sad. Guys like your subject find the “bad girls” and girls like me attract the “bad boys”

    in this respect your subject and I have way to much in common.

    your subject finds the ones only interested in copping out. I always seem to find the ones looking to get even with their ex.
    The creepiest one yet that I met was at first glance, his ex and I could have been sisters. The resemblance was that close.
    your poem hits close to home.

  • Sheila M on Jul 5, 2009

    There are still some things in life that I would like to close the book on ~ this was wonderfully written Ken, loved it!

  • PR Mace on Jul 5, 2009

    Old lost memories found can tear into your heart. Delightfull piece.

  • Melody SJAL on Jul 5, 2009

    What a heart-felt emotionally tinged letter.

  • Daisy Peasblossom on Jul 5, 2009

    I\’ve got a few attic items I should clean out…thats why I\’ve got four filing cabinets and can\’t find anything.

  • Conner Good on Jul 5, 2009

    interesting read…

  • Deep Blue on Jul 6, 2009

    What a romantic letter. Anyway thanks for allowing us to share the intimate part of your life.

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