A letter to George MacDonald.

Dear MacDonald,

I am a student of Loxford School of science and technology writing to you about your food which makes a lot of people obese which lead them to death.

Everyday I see many kids and adults eating fast food. I feel sad for them. They are getting themselves closer to being obese. They go to many shops for fast foods, especially to your shop. They go there for fun. They go there with their friends and families. Fast food doesn’t affect people very quickly. The effects take place in their near future. That’s why many people don’t care about what’s going to happen to them in the future. They know that they might become obese in the future and get bullied or disliked by other people. But they still don’t stop. You!!! Are the one who is making the choose the wrong diet. Yu are preparing those fast foods for them.

I don’t just blame you for all these. I also blame the parents. the parents are partly to blame for their kids eating fast foods because they are the ones who is meant to teach their children to eat healthy foods and ignore unhealthy foods. They take their children to fast food shop like yours which teaches their children to eat unhealthy foods.

I checked the interview

As you know that some teenagers have complained on you for not putting the nutrition information in a place where people would be able to see the information and choose what they want. You didn’t put the nutrition information on a good place that’s why they got unhealthy.

As you know Erric Shloosser who wrote a book against fast food. He wrote about the problem caused by fast food.

Don’t you know the effect of the unhealthy foods. In America 1 million people are overweight, and 400 thousand of them die through obesity. Throughout the world 46 million people go to your shop per day. Your giving 46 million people unhealthy foods every day. Don’t you feel bad about it. Don’t you realise that you’re the one who is leading those innocent people to obesity, and later on to death! How would you feel if one of your family got obese by your unhealthy foods. What would you do? Would you fight to band fast food so no one else gets effected by that.

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  • habib on Nov 23, 2008

    please giv 5 million

  • srm1 on Nov 23, 2008

    ok have you done it to all five of them?
    if you did pls do it once more and ill pay you 6mill!
    if you do it again the third time then 10 mill!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    message me on my account when ur done ok! and ill send you it.

    i might take a day to og on to it cause im busy. dont worry!!

  • razib on Nov 27, 2008

    sick!

  • samu on Nov 4, 2009

    what are you talking about?!

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