Make It Out Alive

Poetic Enigma on Apr 2, 2009

Tags: alive, art, black heart, crazy, creative writing, darkness, death, headlights, insane, Lyrics

These are some lyrics I wrote a while back, that is why they are pretty twisted. Hope you enjoy anyway!

Verse One:
There are no headlights
Just a dead life
Waiting for the end of this life
Waiting for the moment that is perfectly right
Misery That is the only thing I see
No happiness
There is only emptiness
Loneliness

Chorus:
Burning on the inside
No place left to hide
Only a champion could survive
Can I make it out alive?

Verse Two:
Jet black
Heart attack
Too young
Look at what I have become
Hollow eyes
Another stack of lies
Heart that is almost gone
You can see right through
I am numb

Repeat Chorus

Verse three:
No one ever sees
Do I exist?
Who am I?
Why does death always resist?
Say goodbye
One last time
End the lie
One final rhyme

Repeat Chorus

Ending:
Nothing left but emptiness
No more reason to exist
Who knew I would be so depressed
I need to end this mess

Repeat Chorus

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Comments (10)

Kate Smedley on Apr 2, 2009
Nicely written lyrics but very haunting, there’s a big sense of loneliness.
STEVE666 on Apr 2, 2009
Great lyrics—suicide in song.
Christine Ramsay on Apr 2, 2009
It sounds as if you were suffering from depression at the time. A good write though.

Christine
James Strickland III on Apr 2, 2009
Glad they are only feelings and not actions. Life move– and our feelings move right with it. Bad times are only a thunderstorm. If you run hard enough, fast enough, you will work your way out of the storm. Good emotions, though.
Fresh Writing on Apr 2, 2009
Emotional piece-I like how you incorporated a few chorus paragraphs/lines into it.

Nicely done.

-Fresh Writing
Jo Oliver on Apr 2, 2009
loved it!!!!! I think the ending didnt flow as well as the rest but I still loved it.
Debra. on Apr 3, 2009
Beautifully written but sad. Nice job as always, Poetic.
Will Gray on Apr 3, 2009
Remind me of Alice In Chains. Great job!!
Honesty on Apr 6, 2009
This is Good!
S A JOHNSON on Apr 8, 2009
Very cool.

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