New lyrics, what do you think of them?


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Verse One:

When will the tears begin to cease
When can I start feeling a little less lonely
I have made my bed, and now I choose to lay
For a while longer, if not another day

Pre-Chorus

Things always stay the same
With happiness comes pain

Chorus:

Just say it is possible to smile
Instead of feeling the darkness for a while
Just say it is possible to breathe
In and out like I did once in a dream

Verse Two:

Eventually there will come the day
When you’ll look in my eyes and never go astray
I’ll give you my all, and that’s all I want in return
Together we’ll heal, and old bridges we will burn

Pre-Chorus:

Things always stay the same
With happiness comes pain

Chorus:

Just say it is possible to smile
Instead of feeling the darkness for a while
Just say it is possible to breathe
In and out like I did once in a dream

Ending:

One day your heart will say it is real
and our lips will touch and we will seal the deal

But for now,

Just say it is possible to smile
Instead of feeling the darkness for a while
Just say it is possible to breathe
In and out like I did once in a dream

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Comments (9)
  • I Have Had Enough on Jul 23, 2009

    Very nice, now your next mission is to submit it on audio!

  • STEVE666 on Jul 23, 2009

    Good lyrics, PE.
    BTW, the pre-chorus is called ‘the bridge’.

  • BluSphere on Jul 23, 2009

    I like them
    Good work!

  • papaleng on Jul 23, 2009

    nice composition but can you give us what tempo it would be.

  • HatedNation on Jul 23, 2009

    Yeah, I would like to know what styling this would be?

  • Sheila on Jul 24, 2009

    Wonderful

  • S A JOHNSON on Jul 31, 2009

    Very wonderfully written, I wish I could hear you sing it though.

  • Christine Ramsay on Aug 8, 2009

    They sound great to me. Good work.

    Christine

  • nightcharmer on Aug 24, 2009

    Great title and lyrics.. and good message in there. Keep writing!

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