May your heart sing the song of love forever.

Together that’s what will always be
Nothing can break this lovely bond
A magnet that won’t break us free
Pulling us deeper like a quicksand
Our hearts sing this sweet song
Which can be heard in every beat
Like the sweet sound of a gong
The music continues to be a hit
Cause we are now called as one
Loving words were even included
Saying, I do, was part of the plan
Forever this will remain recorded

All about Love by Dee Gold:

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  • Unofre Pili on Feb 13, 2009

    I have enjoyed reading it.

  • godspoet01 on Feb 13, 2009

    good write i like it

  • seashell66 on Feb 13, 2009

    It makes me glad to read this.

  • Joni Keith on Feb 13, 2009

    How sweet.

  • CutestPrincess on Feb 13, 2009

    thanks for sharing this… i liked the video!

  • Inna Tysoe on Feb 14, 2009

    Thanks for that.

    Inna

  • rutherfranc on Feb 14, 2009

    very sweet!

  • JK Kristie on Feb 15, 2009

    I like your style, using motions instead of stills. I’ve always loved origami.

  • Sincere on Feb 15, 2009

    a Love poem very nice

  • Dee Gold on Feb 15, 2009

    thank you all,I really appreciate your comments

  • Luffy12 on Feb 16, 2009

    I like it! how sweet!

  • BC Doan on Feb 17, 2009

    Very touching poem, and the video was great, Dee!

  • Dee Gold on Feb 17, 2009

    thank for your kind comments, Roronoa12 and BC.

  • Dee Gold on Feb 17, 2009

    oh I forgot to add, s after thank.that should be thanks for your kind comments

  • Darla Smith on Feb 19, 2009

    Beautiful!

  • Morgana on Feb 20, 2009

    Beautiful poem, nice paper heart :)

  • Fornis on Feb 20, 2009

    Great poem expressing love.

  • Destinedtobe on Feb 22, 2009

    Extremely sweet

  • Kate Smedley on Feb 24, 2009

    Lovely poem, very expressive

  • stephencardiff on Mar 31, 2009

    nice reading.. thanks for sharing

  • Debra. on Aug 7, 2009

    Beautiful piece.

  • Juancav on Aug 8, 2009

    Lovely piece.

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