As our Michigan summer begins to wane, and the season transitions to the beautiful, colorful Autumn for which the mid-west is known, I’m contemplating the coming changes. In fact, I’ve gotten so caught up in the mystery and wonder of the cycle of life, that I was inspired to write this little ditty. It is sung to the tune of “Rawhide,” with my sincere apologies to Frankie Laine.

(verse 1)
Rakin’, rakin’, rakin’,
though my arms are achin’,
got to keep on rakin’, the Yard -

Soon it might be snowin’,
but now the wind is blowin’,
makin’ my rakin’ twice as hard -

Can’t just stand here, wishin’,
that I could just go fishin’,
’til I finish rakin’, the yard.

(refrain)
Rake ‘em in, pile ‘em up,
bag ‘em up, burn ‘em up,
rake ‘em up, pile ‘em in, the yard -

Rake ‘em in! Pile ‘em up!
Bag ‘em up! Burn ‘em up!
Rakin’ up the yard!

(verse 2)
Rakin’, rakin’, rakin’,
‘though my back is breakin’,
got to finish rakin’, the yard -

No pro-crastinatin’,
the neighbors all are waitin’,
the last hold-out, on our boulevard -

Get the kids to pitch-in,
We’ll have cocoa in the kitchen,
when we finish rakin, the yard.

(refrain)

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  • Louie Jerome on Sep 16, 2009

    I enjoyed this. You don’t want to hear me singing though!

  • R.B. Parsley on Sep 16, 2009

    Joe,
    Loved your poem. I just chop mine up with the lawn mower and let the wind do the rest… much easier that way. Great to see you back old buddy. Its been quite a while. Hope more is on the way.

    Randy

  • Mo Hoyal on Sep 26, 2009

    Hey Joe!

    I enjoyed this very much-keep up the great work! The raking too!

    The pic I will have on my porfile will show me and my beloved mare but I have to get help to upload it so couldn’t leave it on your site and add as a friend. But-do you have any horse articles-stories written? and how can I get there?

    Also, my mare has developed a bad habit: everytime I move her from her paddock to the grassy pasture she drops her head all along the way to nip all the green grass she can that’s in between. She is not hurting for food and is a butterball and in excellent condition. My strength is not what it used to be and I am sure she can tell-keeps my right shoulder in a lot of pain but I yank her up and say no each time in a loud voice. Do you have any suggestions on this one? I would be grateful. I’m no darn greenhorn and this is why it makes me aggravated-lost my upper torso strength from cervical injuries. A clue to give you is that she came from a place where she was only fed grass and she was skinny until I got her-so can this be a horse psychosomatic thing?

    Thanks,

    Mo

  • Joe Poniatowski on Sep 26, 2009

    Mo – for some reason the link with your name isn’t working. How can I get in touch with you? In the mean-time, for horse-related stories, check out my blog: http://www.horsetradersson.com

  • Ruby Hawk on Oct 3, 2009

    I love it, Rawhide was a favorite of mine. your ditty is a good reminder.

  • jaysonv on Dec 11, 2009

    Nicely written. keep it up!

  • Judy Sheldon on Dec 21, 2009

    Loved it. I want to hear it sung. I’m heading over to visit your blog to. I love horses and am a fellow Michigander.

  • Jane Jane on Jan 27, 2010

    Not familiar with the tune.

  • Ruby Hawk on Feb 19, 2010

    Joe, you get another I like.

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