A song about heartbreak. Written in 10 minutes due to sudden inspiration. Yet to be polished.

[Verse]
Show that you love me,
Don’t hide away from me.
Let it be, baby,
Let our love be free.

Show that you care,
Even if you really don’t.
I long for you to be there,
When I’m lost and alone.

[Chorus]
Say it no more,
My love.
When it just doesn’t change.
Say you adore,
My girl,
And say it once more.

Say that you are,
The one,
I truly care for.
Say that you need me,
Again,
And say it once more.

[Verse]
Show that you love me,
Don’t hide away from me.
Let it be, baby,
Let our love be free.

Show that you care,
Even if you really don’t.
I long for you to be there,
When I’m lost and alone.

[Bridge]
And there are things that you see,
Would never be the same again.
When love has grown apart,
And brought all the pain.

[Chorus]
Say it no more,
My love.
When it just doesn’t change.
Say you adore,
My girl,
And say it once more.

Say that you are,
The one,
I truly care for.
Say that you need me,
Again,
And say it once more.

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Comments (5)
  • Guy Hogan on Nov 11, 2009

    I don’t know what kind of music you were thinking of but I bet this would make a kickin’ rock song.

  • Sourav on Nov 11, 2009

    Good write.

  • sexyme on Nov 11, 2009

    i will say it once more

    and many more times

    if you wish to hear from me

    say it once more dear

    to me

  • Christine Ramsay on Nov 12, 2009

    An inspirational piece. Lovely work.

    Christine

  • nightcharmer on Nov 12, 2009

    Thanks guys. Oh, and Guy, didn’t actually thought of making it a rock song. But since you mentioned, that’s some kind of inspiration! Haha. Probably alternative rock though. I like it a bit mellow. =)

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