A song I wrote 12-16-04 when I was thirteen years old.
In my eyes I breathe and see, the color of the pain you gave to me.
It’s hard to see and take this truth, and how your love destroyed my youth.
And how my love just went in vain, crimson is the color of my pain.
***********(chorus)******************
Take me wind oh! take me free, take me into the arms of him. The arms of who broke my heart and left me breathing the color of my pain. Take me wind that I don’t know, I never learned tolet him go. And now I must go on alone, my heart he turned into his throne.
I see the hurt that he has done, I wonder why I thought he was the one.
I make myself each day believe, that God this love will soon retrieve.
And when the sun consumes the rain, perhaps as well this crimson pain.
(chorus 2xs)
And if I die with hurt inside, you’ll see them all through these brown eyes.
So then you’ll say that it was true, I’ve always been in love with you.
This is very beautiful Johanny you can feel true emotions in each line 
I wouldn’t have had any idea how to write this at 13. Great job Johanny!
And its even better when she sings it You’re amazing… simply amazing.
this is awesome
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