Nostalgia poem written by a nostalgic man.

Those were the days
That the time was not important
That we thought
We could never live together
Those were the days
We lived without love
But with pain
Those were the days
You know it was not long time ago
We were dancing like kings and queens
Under the moonlight
Thinking anything what we hid
Thinking anything what we would live
Those were the days
You know it was black and white
That the black was come from your eyes
And white was come from hy heart
Those were the days
Perhaps good
But we were detained
Those were the days I could never live without you
Never without you
Never

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Comments (18)
  • Mobin on Dec 30, 2007

    Nice one!

  • Darlene McFarlane on Dec 30, 2007

    Very nicely put.

  • Liane Schmidt on Jan 2, 2008

    I absolutely love this poem. It’s beautiful and heartwarming.

    Best wishes.

    Sincerely,

  • Arron Turner on Jan 3, 2008

    Very good liked it alot!

  • Pride Fishman on Jan 3, 2008

    Very nice poem. Please read mine ‘Long ago’ and tell me what you think.

  • KitKat on Jan 3, 2008

    very nice

  • Marcus Edward John Cross on Jan 6, 2008

    Very nostalgic, very good.

  • MISHA on Jan 8, 2008

    Your writing skills are not as novice as tou think,I enjoyed it and can relate to it.Its a part of everyones life and you defined it perferctly.

  • IcyCucky on Jan 12, 2008

    Very nice poem…

  • Stars on Jan 13, 2008

    Im in “those days” right now…!

    Nice poem -

  • Lucy Lockett on Jan 13, 2008

    Nice words!

  • Moses Ingram on Jan 15, 2008

    Very nice, Thank you.

  • aytaç on Jan 21, 2008

    teşekkürler herşey için :)

  • turgut hanoymak on Jan 29, 2008

    reaaly nice and romantic,all thanks to the poet !

  • mehmet on Feb 22, 2008

    eywallah

  • utkun on Feb 24, 2008

    Extraordinary poem

  • david ross on Jul 8, 2008

    helps bring back memories

  • jesus on May 18, 2009

    Not bad, but you got a lot to learn about making a poem flow. It was a little choppy at parts

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