Where Did You Go?

Fresh Writing on May 3, 2009

We made it there, crossed that bridge, and loved each other for it…But where did you go?

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We crossed that bridge, hopped that fence, built our home, stacked that cash, and made our tree

Why, can’t you see?

We made it across the meadow, skipping happily, we went downtown, it seemed we could have it all

But your arrogance was too tall- my questioning too small

Why, why I don’t understand

Why you left me so

You had a lot of nerve, dropping me off

I thought we had something special, but then you left

This is not a song trying to drive hits, baby, ohhh no.

This is a song describing how you broke my heart and soul

Maybe you don’t understand

How hard it is to deal with this

How hard it is to feel the whole in my heart you have actuated

We crossed that bridge, hopped that fence, built our home, stacked that cash, and made our tree

Why, can’t you see?

We made it across the meadow, skipping happily, we went downtown, it seemed we could have it all

But your arrogance was too tall- my questioning too small

Oh, maybe it’s the man pulling strings that doesn’t understand

Controlling us like puppets

He’ll make you leave and cut my strings

Maybe he has red horns; why am I the one to suffer?

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Miss Heda on May 3, 2009
oh this is very sad =o(
payge on May 3, 2009
Been there,did that,dont wanna do it again.A very interesting piece to read.
Daisy Peasblossom on May 3, 2009
Hang in there kid. Time does heal…even if it doesn’t seem like it. Beautiful write.
Joie Schmidt on May 3, 2009
Heartfelt, beautiful, good work*

Blessings.

Sincerely,

-Liane Schmidt.
Kate Smedley on May 4, 2009
Daisy’s right, time does heal, this is beautifully written.
Debra. on May 5, 2009
Sad but so wonderfully written! I loved the format.
Erin Cree on May 5, 2009
Heartfelt writing, your work is always a ‘joy’ (although maybe the wrong word for this particular poem) to read.

Erin

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