Here’s a cute fan fiction story on Alvin and the Chipmunks. Takes place after the Squeakquel.

Eleanor awoke an hour before the alarm and quickly woke her sisters. “Hurry, you guys, before the boys wake up,” she whispered.

“Okay, okay, I’m awake,” Brittany snapped.

Jeanette pulled herself out of bed. “It is our day to make breakfast.”

All three girls walked into the bathroom and shut the door.

“Yea, yea, I know,” Brittany grumbled. “Mornings would be better if they started at noon.” Her two sisters giggled. “Alright, girls, enough laughing at my expense.”

After they finished washing up and dressing for the day they made their way to the kitchen to start breakfast. When it came to cooking, Eleanor was the boss, giving orders to her two sisters. Eleanor was a sweet girl, but for her cooking was serious business.

Brittany hated taking orders from anyone, especially her baby sister and screamed at her for her criticism. “That’s enough, Eleanor. You make the Pancakes. I’ll set the table.”

“Okay, Sorry, Britt, but pancake making is an art form.”

Jeanette giggled as Brittany gave Eleanor a snide smirk. “Yea, right.”

A half hour later, most everything was done. “Wow,” Jeanette said. “It looks great.”

Yea,” Brittany said. “The table looks good, but it’s still missing something.” She thought a moment. “Wait a minute. I’ll be right back.” Brittany flew out the back door and into the yard.

Jeanette and Eleanor looked confused, both shrugging their shoulders in confusion. A few minutes passed until Brittany returned, carrying a pretty bouquet of flowers.

“Those are very pretty,” Eleanor said.

“What’s a set table without a center piece?” Jeanette said.

Eleanor hopped up on the counter and reached for the top cabinet to find a glass vase for the flowers. She climbed down and brought the vase to the table. Brittany placed the flowers in the vase. She stepped back observing the table.

“Prefect,” she said. All three girls giggled, proud of their hard work.

At that moment Dave walked in. “Hmmmm. What smells so good?” He asked, breathing in the aroma.

“Breakfast is ready,” Eleanor said. “Are the boys awake?”

“If I know Alvin,” Brittany began, “he’s still snoring away. I’ll get them, even if I have to throw them out of bed myself.” She meant that more for Alvin than the other two chipmunks.

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Comments (19)
  • Ranjan Mathews on Jan 16, 2010

    Am familiar with Alvin & Simon in the Chipmunks’ songs. This story type is different, feels like going back to nursery school and ol’ comics.

  • S A JOHNSON on Jan 17, 2010

    Very cute. ^_^

  • thuanynguyen on Jan 18, 2010

    Brilliant!

  • desireedphelps2006 on Jan 18, 2010

    Cute story! Loved it!

  • Joanna Maharis on Jan 18, 2010

    This is very cute. I have been a huge fan of Alvin and the Chipmunks ever since I was a little kid. As I was reading this chapter, I could see story playing out in my mind. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this.

  • kate smedley on Jan 19, 2010

    Very cute story, thanks for sharing.

  • Videomark on Jan 22, 2010

    Very enjoyable read.

  • Mr Ghaz on Jan 29, 2010

    Fantastic story, very fascinating ..loved this stuff..keep em’ coming thanks for sharing….cheers 8) 8)

  • V rank on Jan 30, 2010

    This is exactly what I expected from you… great compelling peace…

  • BluSphere on Jan 30, 2010

    Enjoyed it ! :D

  • qasimdharamsy on Jan 30, 2010

    very lovely…..

  • Lee Portera on Jan 31, 2010

    Thanks for sharing. I enjoyed this so much :)

  • Alfredo22251 on Jan 31, 2010

    Nice story, and enjoyable to read.

  • Peter Cimino on Feb 2, 2010

    Well done. Good for you.

  • cutiepie32024 on Feb 3, 2010

    Very nice, I liked it(:

  • babygirl3605 on May 19, 2010

    I liked it to.

  • Chicago Hardwood Flooring on May 14, 2011

    This a cute little story im going to continue to read it

  • Tiki33 on Oct 23, 2011

    Very creative. I really enjoyed this i believe that you can write scripts. Thanks for allowing me to read this.

  • brittany on Jan 28, 2012

    Me gustó, pero es muy corta.

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