The continuing saga of Tristan the truck driver and his never ending nightmare jobs.

So once again Tristan had returned home from a failed driving job with his tail between his legs. He was so frustrated and angry. He was angry at the world, the economy, the entire trucking industry and God. “What am I supposed to be doing? … Where am I supposed to be at this point in my life? … God, just show me the way! … Show me what you want me to do and I’ll do it!” He pleaded silently to the air above. But his response was an ear shattering silence accompanied with a very bad feeling that nothing was going to improve any time soon. “I just don’t know what to do anymore… it used to be so easy to make good money in trucking…and that wasn’t all that long ago, either…now it seems as though the bottom has dropped out of the entire industry…what are we going to do? …God help me, I don’t know what to do!” Tears began to well up in his sorrowful blue eyes and his heart ached deep inside his chest. “I’ve always been able to figure out a way to survive and make a good living…to take care of my family…now it seems like everything I touch turns to dust.” He was sobbing now and begging his creator for help and guidance. As he sat at the desk in the office of their Victorian home he heard Maura enter the room from behind. He quickly wiped his eyes with the sleeve of his shirt before she could see him crying. Although she had seen him wipe his eyes and knew, she didn’t say anything rather, she let him keep his dignity in tact.

“Sweetie, what about Grass Trucking? Have you ever heard anything bad about them?”

Tristan considered her question before answering.

“No, I don’t think I have, honey, why?”

“Well, they have an ad in this trucking magazine that you brought home for lease operators…I was just thinking that maybe you’d be happier if you became an owner-operator again…”

Now that was an idea… yeah, maybe he should give that some serious thought!

Maura watched his whole demeanor change from dark despair to joyful hope in a matter of a few seconds.

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  • PR Mace on Jun 22, 2008

    Nick, I am so sorry things keep working out badly for you. There is a job for you that you will love and can earn a living. I want to see a story one day called : Doomed No More. I will pray for you and Jan. May God bless you both.

  • Ruby Hawk on Jun 22, 2008

    Nick, I realy enjoyed reading another episode of Tristan. You have a very interesting story going here.

  • tracy sardelli on Jun 23, 2008

    this is really sad….but so well written, you have great talent, you know how to keep your readers captivated.

  • Anne Lyken-Garner on Jun 24, 2008

    Once again, a captivating episode – though I must say quite sad.

    If we get all we want from the start we would not know how to appreciate things. How else can we build up hope, unless we’re made to have lots of practise doing it?

  • Alexa Gates on Jun 28, 2008

    I just couldn\’t stop reading this!

  • IcyCucky on Jun 30, 2008

    Sad, but really interesting story. It took me a few days to get to the end, but I have to say I’m hooked with Tristan’s constant troubles/problems…

    Hope everything goes well for you soon!

  • Lucy Lockett on Jun 30, 2008

    I really like the way stories take on a life of their own, you have done well!

  • KathySpring on Jul 3, 2008

    WOW!!! and you were so excited about that teal truck, sorry it didn’t work out in the end. Hope your next entry has a little more hope in it.
    Love and Sunshine
    Kathy

  • Richard Wing on Aug 13, 2009

    What a great trucker story Nick. Your dialogue is flawless and you have an awesome wife for a support system. Kind of reminds me a bit of construction trades. Homeowners would change their mind on a particular design or appliance, other alterations had to be made to accomodate which takes more time, throws your dead line way off and they would expect you to meet their demands on time all the while they change the process costing more time and money then complain. As you, I never missed my deadlines…I just worked harder and longer but with no appreciation. You become thick skinned as your character seems to be frustrated with the whole biz understandibly, but moves forward in spite of it all. I like the other characters that Tristan runs into.Gives your literary voice a moral position on his decisions and where he stands in life as a man but still casting no judgement, just wonder. Your moral judgements seem to guide the character in the right direction from his heart and the great wife as a solid support system. Great installment to a finely crafted series. 10/10 Thumbs up!

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