The continuing saga of Tristan the truck driver and his never ending nightmare jobs.

He’d done everything he could to run these loads and had been set up just like Gary had said to fail both times. This was not the company for him!

He finally hung up on Holly. It was over.

Next, he called the truck dealership and spoke with the manager.

“Why are you leaving Mr. Healey?” The gentleman asked.

So, as Tristan explained everything to him, the man listened quietly.

When Tristan had finished, the man was obviously upset about what had happened to Tristan.

“Okay, I’m documenting all of this. You were treated very shabbily and forced to run illegally both times…”

“Yes, sir.” Tristan replied.

“Okay, Mr. Healey. I’d appreciate it if you return my truck to Louisville.”

“Yes, sir, I plan to return it. I don’t have any way to get home, I’ll have to walk but I will return your truck.”

“Oh no, you won’t walk home, where do you live?” The man asked.

“I live in Flint, Michigan, sir.”

“Okay, I’ll buy you a bus ticket and give you money for cab fare back to the bus station in Louisville, you will not walk home, sir!”

Tristan was touched. This man truly cared and felt bad about how Tristan had been treated.

Tristan told him that the truck was dirty when he’d gotten into it and that the jake brake didn’t work.

“It’s probably just a fuse.” Tristan added.

“Yeah, probably is.” The man agreed.

“Also, Mr. Healey, if you need anything until you get back to Louisville, you have my extension number, just give me a call. If there’s anything I can do to help you out…”

Tristan thanked him and said that he would be leaving shortly to head for Louisville. Maura helped Tristan unload his things from the truck. Everything came out except what he would need until he returned home two days later.

Tristan headed for Louisville. He knew that his driving career was almost over.

It had run its course. It wasn’t the same industry that he’d fallen in love with 24 years earlier.

But then he wasn’t the same rough and tough kid either…

Once arriving back at the Louisville terminal he explained to everyone what had happened. Everyone apologized and said that it was the company’s loss that he was leaving. He was also told that he wasn’t the first driver that Holly had treated this way and forced out but that he just might be the last one she did it to!

Several people phoned their head terminal out of state and talked to executives about this dispatcher.

“Trust me, Tristan, this is not over!” He’d been told.

He was even asked to call two executives with the company and tell them what had happened. So, he did. They were both very nice and both asked him to stay and give them another chance but the damage was done. Tristan just couldn’t find it in him to stay and trust them again. He’d been hurt too badly.

“All I ask is that you prevent this from happening to anyone else.” Tristan had asked.

“I have power with this company, Tristan, just tell me what you want and it’s yours!” The man stated.

“Just don’t let Holly treat another driver the way she treated me…that’s all I ask.”

“We’re losing a good driver…this is our loss…” The man said sadly.

Tristan headed outside to the waiting taxicab. He was ready to go home.

He had learned a lot. He no longer wanted to own his own truck.

He no longer wanted to drive a truck period. That chapter of his life was ending.

He just wanted to be home everyday with Maura, their pups and cats.

The restless spirit deep inside of him was now ready to go home to stay.

But it wouldn’t end just yet and he knew it…

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  • PR Mace on Jun 22, 2008

    Nick, I am so sorry things keep working out badly for you. There is a job for you that you will love and can earn a living. I want to see a story one day called : Doomed No More. I will pray for you and Jan. May God bless you both.

  • Ruby Hawk on Jun 22, 2008

    Nick, I realy enjoyed reading another episode of Tristan. You have a very interesting story going here.

  • tracy sardelli on Jun 23, 2008

    this is really sad….but so well written, you have great talent, you know how to keep your readers captivated.

  • Anne Lyken-Garner on Jun 24, 2008

    Once again, a captivating episode – though I must say quite sad.

    If we get all we want from the start we would not know how to appreciate things. How else can we build up hope, unless we’re made to have lots of practise doing it?

  • Alexa Gates on Jun 28, 2008

    I just couldn\’t stop reading this!

  • IcyCucky on Jun 30, 2008

    Sad, but really interesting story. It took me a few days to get to the end, but I have to say I’m hooked with Tristan’s constant troubles/problems…

    Hope everything goes well for you soon!

  • Lucy Lockett on Jun 30, 2008

    I really like the way stories take on a life of their own, you have done well!

  • KathySpring on Jul 3, 2008

    WOW!!! and you were so excited about that teal truck, sorry it didn’t work out in the end. Hope your next entry has a little more hope in it.
    Love and Sunshine
    Kathy

  • Richard Wing on Aug 13, 2009

    What a great trucker story Nick. Your dialogue is flawless and you have an awesome wife for a support system. Kind of reminds me a bit of construction trades. Homeowners would change their mind on a particular design or appliance, other alterations had to be made to accomodate which takes more time, throws your dead line way off and they would expect you to meet their demands on time all the while they change the process costing more time and money then complain. As you, I never missed my deadlines…I just worked harder and longer but with no appreciation. You become thick skinned as your character seems to be frustrated with the whole biz understandibly, but moves forward in spite of it all. I like the other characters that Tristan runs into.Gives your literary voice a moral position on his decisions and where he stands in life as a man but still casting no judgement, just wonder. Your moral judgements seem to guide the character in the right direction from his heart and the great wife as a solid support system. Great installment to a finely crafted series. 10/10 Thumbs up!

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