The continuing saga of Tristan the truck driver and his never ending nightmare jobs.

Tristan took off for Owensboro and didn’t stop till he’d reached the shipper.

He was loaded immediately and took off after making his loaded check in call to dispatch and bringing up his log.

It had been raining all day and was still coming down pretty hard as Tristan wheeled the massive rig southward toward his destination of Ft. Smith, Arkansas.

He only made two stops all day long, once to fuel in Matthews, Missouri and later for a pit stop. He stopped for the night in Earl, Arkansas and once settled in he did the math on how far out he was from his destination and what time he would arrive. The figures told him that he would be a half hour late for his appointment. He redid the math to make sure. The same result came up on his calculator. He had to send dispatch a message over the satellite alerting them of the problem. He’d put it in their hands that was all he could do. He’d driven his 11 hours and now had to shut down for 10 hours. This was federal law in the United States for truck drivers. He’d only stopped twice during his run and had run five miles over the speed limit the entire way. There was nothing else he could’ve done. Now it was time to call in the big guns…dispatch and they would have to bump the delivery time back or re-power the load.

Tristan wasn’t concerned about it he’d done all he could do. Holly had dispatched him 4 hours late on it to begin with and there was no way that he could make up that time. It was gone forever.

Dispatch answered his message with; “this load has to deliver at 8:00 a.m. C.S.T. or the entire assembly line will shut down.”

Tristan was no longer amused. He phoned dispatch. He explained everything but the dispatcher’s only comment was the same; “this load can’t be late, the whole assembly line will shut down if it is!”

“Can’t you re-power the load?” Tristan asked.

“No, we don’t do that.” The man replied.

“Okay, so what do we do now then?” Tristan questioned.

“Well, I don’t know. I guess you should just take your ten- hour break and then call your dispatcher the first thing in the morning. Maybe she can have the delivery time changed.”

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  • PR Mace on Jun 22, 2008

    Nick, I am so sorry things keep working out badly for you. There is a job for you that you will love and can earn a living. I want to see a story one day called : Doomed No More. I will pray for you and Jan. May God bless you both.

  • Ruby Hawk on Jun 22, 2008

    Nick, I realy enjoyed reading another episode of Tristan. You have a very interesting story going here.

  • tracy sardelli on Jun 23, 2008

    this is really sad….but so well written, you have great talent, you know how to keep your readers captivated.

  • Anne Lyken-Garner on Jun 24, 2008

    Once again, a captivating episode – though I must say quite sad.

    If we get all we want from the start we would not know how to appreciate things. How else can we build up hope, unless we’re made to have lots of practise doing it?

  • Alexa Gates on Jun 28, 2008

    I just couldn\’t stop reading this!

  • IcyCucky on Jun 30, 2008

    Sad, but really interesting story. It took me a few days to get to the end, but I have to say I’m hooked with Tristan’s constant troubles/problems…

    Hope everything goes well for you soon!

  • Lucy Lockett on Jun 30, 2008

    I really like the way stories take on a life of their own, you have done well!

  • KathySpring on Jul 3, 2008

    WOW!!! and you were so excited about that teal truck, sorry it didn’t work out in the end. Hope your next entry has a little more hope in it.
    Love and Sunshine
    Kathy

  • Richard Wing on Aug 13, 2009

    What a great trucker story Nick. Your dialogue is flawless and you have an awesome wife for a support system. Kind of reminds me a bit of construction trades. Homeowners would change their mind on a particular design or appliance, other alterations had to be made to accomodate which takes more time, throws your dead line way off and they would expect you to meet their demands on time all the while they change the process costing more time and money then complain. As you, I never missed my deadlines…I just worked harder and longer but with no appreciation. You become thick skinned as your character seems to be frustrated with the whole biz understandibly, but moves forward in spite of it all. I like the other characters that Tristan runs into.Gives your literary voice a moral position on his decisions and where he stands in life as a man but still casting no judgement, just wonder. Your moral judgements seem to guide the character in the right direction from his heart and the great wife as a solid support system. Great installment to a finely crafted series. 10/10 Thumbs up!

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