Comments on: Doomed From the Start: Chapter Five http://authspot.com/novels/doomed-from-the-start-chapter-five/ Sat, 21 Nov 2009 20:31:05 -0500 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.4 hourly 1 By: Richard Wing http://authspot.com/novels/doomed-from-the-start-chapter-five/comment-page-1/#comment-877445 Richard Wing Thu, 13 Aug 2009 17:50:32 +0000 http://authspot.com/novels/doomed-from-the-start-chapter-five/#comment-877445 What a great trucker story Nick. Your dialogue is flawless and you have an awesome wife for a support system. Kind of reminds me a bit of construction trades. Homeowners would change their mind on a particular design or appliance, other alterations had to be made to accomodate which takes more time, throws your dead line way off and they would expect you to meet their demands on time all the while they change the process costing more time and money then complain. As you, I never missed my deadlines...I just worked harder and longer but with no appreciation. You become thick skinned as your character seems to be frustrated with the whole biz understandibly, but moves forward in spite of it all. I like the other characters that Tristan runs into.Gives your literary voice a moral position on his decisions and where he stands in life as a man but still casting no judgement, just wonder. Your moral judgements seem to guide the character in the right direction from his heart and the great wife as a solid support system. Great installment to a finely crafted series. 10/10 Thumbs up! What a great trucker story Nick. Your dialogue is flawless and you have an awesome wife for a support system. Kind of reminds me a bit of construction trades. Homeowners would change their mind on a particular design or appliance, other alterations had to be made to accomodate which takes more time, throws your dead line way off and they would expect you to meet their demands on time all the while they change the process costing more time and money then complain. As you, I never missed my deadlines…I just worked harder and longer but with no appreciation. You become thick skinned as your character seems to be frustrated with the whole biz understandibly, but moves forward in spite of it all. I like the other characters that Tristan runs into.Gives your literary voice a moral position on his decisions and where he stands in life as a man but still casting no judgement, just wonder. Your moral judgements seem to guide the character in the right direction from his heart and the great wife as a solid support system. Great installment to a finely crafted series. 10/10 Thumbs up!

]]> By: KathySpring http://authspot.com/novels/doomed-from-the-start-chapter-five/comment-page-1/#comment-496227 KathySpring Thu, 03 Jul 2008 12:14:26 +0000 http://authspot.com/novels/doomed-from-the-start-chapter-five/#comment-496227 WOW!!! and you were so excited about that teal truck, sorry it didn't work out in the end. Hope your next entry has a little more hope in it. <br /> Love and Sunshine<br /> Kathy WOW!!! and you were so excited about that teal truck, sorry it didn’t work out in the end. Hope your next entry has a little more hope in it.
Love and Sunshine
Kathy

]]> By: Lucy Lockett http://authspot.com/novels/doomed-from-the-start-chapter-five/comment-page-1/#comment-496225 Lucy Lockett Tue, 01 Jul 2008 05:24:59 +0000 http://authspot.com/novels/doomed-from-the-start-chapter-five/#comment-496225 I really like the way stories take on a life of their own, you have done well! I really like the way stories take on a life of their own, you have done well!

]]> By: IcyCucky http://authspot.com/novels/doomed-from-the-start-chapter-five/comment-page-1/#comment-496223 IcyCucky Mon, 30 Jun 2008 23:32:14 +0000 http://authspot.com/novels/doomed-from-the-start-chapter-five/#comment-496223 Sad, but really interesting story. It took me a few days to get to the end, but I have to say I'm hooked with Tristan's constant troubles/problems...<br /> <br /> Hope everything goes well for you soon! Sad, but really interesting story. It took me a few days to get to the end, but I have to say I’m hooked with Tristan’s constant troubles/problems…

Hope everything goes well for you soon!

]]> By: Alexa Gates http://authspot.com/novels/doomed-from-the-start-chapter-five/comment-page-1/#comment-496221 Alexa Gates Sun, 29 Jun 2008 00:19:05 +0000 http://authspot.com/novels/doomed-from-the-start-chapter-five/#comment-496221 I just couldn\'t stop reading this! I just couldn\’t stop reading this!

]]> By: Anne Lyken-Garner http://authspot.com/novels/doomed-from-the-start-chapter-five/comment-page-1/#comment-496219 Anne Lyken-Garner Tue, 24 Jun 2008 18:41:17 +0000 http://authspot.com/novels/doomed-from-the-start-chapter-five/#comment-496219 Once again, a captivating episode - though I must say quite sad.<br /> <br /> If we get all we want from the start we would not know how to appreciate things. How else can we build up hope, unless we're made to have lots of practise doing it?<br /> <br /> Once again, a captivating episode – though I must say quite sad.

If we get all we want from the start we would not know how to appreciate things. How else can we build up hope, unless we’re made to have lots of practise doing it?

]]> By: tracy sardelli http://authspot.com/novels/doomed-from-the-start-chapter-five/comment-page-1/#comment-496217 tracy sardelli Tue, 24 Jun 2008 02:40:31 +0000 http://authspot.com/novels/doomed-from-the-start-chapter-five/#comment-496217 this is really sad....but so well written, you have great talent, you know how to keep your readers captivated. this is really sad….but so well written, you have great talent, you know how to keep your readers captivated.

]]> By: Ruby Hawk http://authspot.com/novels/doomed-from-the-start-chapter-five/comment-page-1/#comment-496215 Ruby Hawk Sun, 22 Jun 2008 23:58:50 +0000 http://authspot.com/novels/doomed-from-the-start-chapter-five/#comment-496215 Nick, I realy enjoyed reading another episode of Tristan. You have a very interesting story going here. Nick, I realy enjoyed reading another episode of Tristan. You have a very interesting story going here.

]]> By: PR Mace http://authspot.com/novels/doomed-from-the-start-chapter-five/comment-page-1/#comment-496213 PR Mace Sun, 22 Jun 2008 22:51:08 +0000 http://authspot.com/novels/doomed-from-the-start-chapter-five/#comment-496213 Nick, I am so sorry things keep working out badly for you. There is a job for you that you will love and can earn a living. I want to see a story one day called : Doomed No More. I will pray for you and Jan. May God bless you both. Nick, I am so sorry things keep working out badly for you. There is a job for you that you will love and can earn a living. I want to see a story one day called : Doomed No More. I will pray for you and Jan. May God bless you both.

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