The continuing saga of a man’s truck driving job that has been plagued with bad omens from the start.

After his medical appointment in Ann Arbor and being given the “cancer free” news, Tristan focused his attention on where he was going to go now for a job.

He certainly wasn’t going back out with Bill…

He still had the name and phone number of the owner-operator that he and Bill had gotten the load from in the Chicago area a couple of weeks earlier. His name was Mike and he’d been looking for a good co-driver. He’d asked Tristan if he knew of anyone but Tristan didn’t. Good drivers, professional drivers were hard to find.

I wonder if he’s still looking for a co-driver…he seemed like a nice guy. I didn’t pick up any bad vibes from him…

Most truck drivers went by their gut feelings. Tristan was no exception to this rule.

There’d been too many times during his career that it had literally saved his life.

His truck was clean, he was in uniform and looked professional…all very good signs!

I guess it wouldn’t hurt for me to call him and ask if he’s still looking for a co-driver…

Mike was indeed still looking and told Tristan that he’d wanted him for a co-driver right after they’d met.

“I had a really good feeling about you, Tristan! You were in uniform, you looked clean and neat, your attitude was professional and you knew what you were doing…”

“Well, thanks, Mike! I felt the same way about you!”

“So, what was going on with the other guy? …your co-driver…he seemed like a real winner!” Mike teased.

“Oh God! Don’t even get me started on him!” Tristan pleaded.

“No, really, Tristan…I mean I noticed that he wasn’t at all interested in helping either of us secure the load in your truck and I got the feeling that he thought he was better than we were…what’s up with that?”

So, Tristan explained. Mike was not impressed.

The two men rambled on for quite awhile, each trying to get a feel for what the other one was like. There was nothing worse than being thrown into the small confines of a truck only to find out that you can’t stand the other driver.

Tristan wasn’t in a real big hurry to jump aboard another man’s truck until he had a better feel about this guy, so, the talks continued for the next week.

Finally, Mike asked him if he was interested in the job and told Tristan what he’d pay him.

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  • tracy sardelli on May 9, 2008

    wow, all i can say is absolutely brilliant. well done.

  • salvatore on May 9, 2008

    excellent story, you are truly a gifted writer. well done.

  • Nick Kenney on May 9, 2008

    Thank you Tracy and Salvatore…but to be completely honest it’s a true story so all I did was nararate what happened…

  • IcyCucky on May 9, 2008

    My goodness, Nick..I’m sorry but I laughed too when Maura laughed out loud..Hopefully, things will be better soon.

  • Nick Kenney on May 9, 2008

    What a trip! Let’s hope so, Icy!!

  • KathySpring on May 9, 2008

    OOOHH…my…this as a story was hilarious and scary…as an actual even…someone going through…is down right scary and insane…Nick I hope you have better luck soon. How can you have to bad lucks in a row? Gods Blessings…Keep up the Good writing

    Love and Sunshine
    KathySpring

  • johnnie metcalfe on May 9, 2008

    nick this was a very good story

  • Nick Kenney on May 9, 2008

    Thank you, Kathy! Let\’s hope so,eh?!
    Thank you Johnnie!

  • KathySpring on May 10, 2008

    Okay Had to read it again…this was funny. I’m sorry it happened to you…but the Mike….Tina thing was funny…Walmart and all that…You poor guy..Best of luck on your new truck…

  • Nick Kenney on May 10, 2008

    Thanks Kathy! At least I’ll be in my own truck! I’ll be watching for Mike out there, too, if I see him or his truck I’ll be sure to make a wide berth around him!! Take care of yourself!

  • Alexa Gates on May 10, 2008

    very good story!

  • Anne Lyken-Garner on May 10, 2008

    What a brillant story, and you used such descriptive language to tell it. Even though it makes you take deep breathes of wonder at some points, it does make you laugh in others.

    Fab work!

  • Ruby Hawk on May 10, 2008

    Kenny, You have a great story here. I have enjoyed it. Best of luck. Ruby

  • Shames on May 11, 2008

    I really enjoyed reading this story, Nickholas.

  • Francie on May 16, 2008

    Oh my. this was quite a story! An adventure I know you would not want to repeat. All the goings on although sound amusing, I am sure were not at all amusing to you. Strange fellas…good story!

  • Dee Huff on May 29, 2008

    Oh Nick, I could just picture Mike/Tina with stubble and hairy legs and a ton of makeup swanning around WalMart! It’s so cringeworthy! Never mind, you’re safely away from the “twisted Tinkerbell” ( I love that description). Third time lucky!

  • Nick Kenney on May 29, 2008

    Lol, that’s what Jan and I are hoping, Dee…third time being the charm!! My next co-driver’s name is John and we met for lunch yesterday to check each other out before starting down the road together…very nice guy, we have a lot in common. He cringed when I told him about “Mike”.

  • Darlene Mc Farlane on May 29, 2008

    You tell the story so well, Nick. I know I am laughing at your expense but it’s your own fault for being such a darned good story teller. I am sure the whole thing was a nightmare for you and I really do give you credit for sticking it out as long as you did.

    All kidding aside, you told your story brilliantly and you know what they say about truth being stranger than fiction.

    Thanks for the great read,
    Darlene

    P.S. Mike seemed a little heart broken when you told him you were quitting. I wonder who he is calling sweetie now.

  • Nick Kenney on May 30, 2008

    :) Thank you Darlene… I still shiver when I think about it.
    I’m hoping with every fiber of my being that I never run into him again! His other thing is that he wants his co-driver to do all of the driving while he sleeps! Jan said it sounded as though he was falling for me…that really makes me twitch!!

  • PR Mace on Jun 1, 2008

    Hi Sweetie,

    Sorry, just had to say it. Wow, I did not see that coming and I had to laugh with your wife too. Great story. Sorry that it is true. I hope the next time Craig and I take a vacation I don’t look up and see Mike/Tina. What a wild ride. Looking forward to the last chapter. I will send you a message about nursing and the CNA program soon.

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