Olya and Sheeba use the staff to transport themselves home, but find themselves in a world that is not theirs.

In the land of Poe in an outer reality unknown to these three wayward travelers, a dark and dismal world they witnessed. Its natives wearing brown cloaks covering them from top to bottom. Faces are almost invisible and eye contact never made.

“This is too much,” Sheeba said, passing a man, who ran in terror at the sight of her.

“I know,” Olya remarked. “This isn’t the way things are supposed to be. Where’s the stage of the Fool’s Theater, the street musicians. At least a friendly face.”

“Not in this universe, Oli. I mean, they’re all acting like they don’t know us.”

“Perhaps, they don’t,” Olya said, looking straight into her sister’s eyes.

“Olya,” Dersko scolded, “that’s ridiculous. How can you not exist?”

“We need answers, Dersko, not more questions.”

“Your answers will have to wait,” Desko said. “Olya, look.” Dersko pointed to a disturbance.

“That poor man,” Olya said. “I have to help him.”

“Oli, wait,” Sheeba pleaded. Then looking to Dersko, she said, “Well, just don’t stand there. Let’s see how much trouble we can find.”
The two ran to their partner who had things very much in hand. They stopped the beating of the elderly man and continued their ruthless treatment on their feminine assailant.

“Is that the best you boys can do? What did that poor man ever do to you?” She identified them as the two minions of Bloss they had fought on Gaspen.

“He is a dwarf, and dwarfs are evil,” Ardane spoke distinctly.

“Who says?” Olya asked, the anger boiling inside her.

“The great Lord Bloss… the all-knowing, the all-powerful,” Froth claimed in cracked speech.

The thought made Olya cringe, especially when the villagers sang a vacant eerie chant of the words.

“What have you done to these people?”

“Lord Bloss has showed them to way,” Ardane said.

“I have a new way,” she said, removing her gloves. She placed a hand on each one, cultivating her power into pure energy. The incident lasted all of thirty seconds before both men went down, but the surge was enough to leave her breathless and unsteady in her footing.

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Comments (12)
  • Will Davis on Nov 4, 2008

    great peace of work. I hope you have more on soon and when you do send me a link.

  • goodselfme on Nov 5, 2008

    well composed.

  • Joanna Maharis on Nov 6, 2008

    I really enjoyed this. I like the way Mary Faigon was incorporated into the story. I also like the notion of Mary Faigon being from the Blue Planet. Great work here.

    Take Care,

    Joanna Maharis

  • Dendro Azures on Nov 15, 2008

    I thoroughly enjoyed this story Allison! Wonderful writing!! :) It easily captivated me.

  • Juancav on Dec 5, 2008

    There’s so much talent in this novel, which will have to bear fruit, congratulations.

  • domino on Feb 10, 2009

    Great story!

  • Collen on Mar 18, 2009

    Great story

  • Kali on Mar 18, 2009

    I enjoyed it thoroughly.

  • Sarah on Mar 18, 2009

    Wow! This was great. Got more?

  • Katie Roe on Mar 18, 2009

    I love this story and I want more.

  • loja de cds virtual on May 19, 2011

    Great! thanks!!!!

  • Goldrangefinders on Jun 30, 2011

    Remarkable story that is too good. Will wait for more post from you

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