A story about betrayal and distrust. The atmosphere is tense so I try to lighten it up a bit with the names- Tom, Dick and Harry. Enjoy!

 

Read chapter 0ne here

 

The night was silent, the moon hidden; the stars had fled along with the wind. The silence screamed through the impenetrable darkness. There was a stillness about the night that had dogs cowering into their cages with their tails between their legs and cats slinking beneath tables. The beasts as well as the elements seem to perceive that the night was like no other, how right they were!

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Harry hummed softly as he cleaned one side of his father’s car while Dick cleaned the other side the next morning. It was 9am. He could feel Dick’s eyes on him but he pretended not to notice. He knew Dick would say what was on his mind when he was ready. Dick cleared his throat but Harry still paid no attention to him.

“Harry…”

“Yes?’

“It’s 9am “, Dick looked pointedly in the direction of the kitchen. “So? Harry was not always the most patient person to be around.

‘So I am hungry, aren’t you?

Harry shook his head.

‘If you are hungry then go make yourself something to eat”

“Promise should be doing that! It’s 9am and she is still asleep in her room. You would never let me sleep that long but you let her. You always take her side and I am getting sick and tired of it!”, Dick said resentfully throwing the towel into  a bucket and storming off. Harry watched his retreating form thoughtfully then continued cleaning the car.

 

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  • vijayanths on Mar 18, 2011

    Good post.

  • Christine Ramsay on Mar 18, 2011

    Now I have just got to go back and read chapter one. You have grabbed my attention with this story. It is so well written.

  • happydoodlegirl on Mar 18, 2011

    what the helll ! ..omg ! ..I just HOPE that her mother is just assuming stuff !..

  • sanataryal on Mar 18, 2011

    I’m waiting for chapter 3 now…when you gonna post it?…Excellent writing.

  • roxibb on Mar 18, 2011

    anticipating chapter 3!

  • Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on Mar 19, 2011

    Creepy, I didnt expect the bit about Promise.

    Good story thus far.

  • d1dezire on Mar 19, 2011

    Thanx everybody. The last chapter will be here tomorrow

  • CHIPMUNK on Mar 19, 2011

    Interesting one

  • JoniJones on Mar 19, 2011

    Thanks for sharing

  • anndavey650 on Mar 19, 2011

    Chapter 3 pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!

  • V rank on Mar 19, 2011

    hmmm… great job. excited for the next part.

  • Gideon Edoh on Mar 20, 2011

    Tomi, nice write-up. English shud b rily proud of u. Wait! R u stayin in kaduna? Did u just relocate there 2 focus on ur new found career as a journalist?lol.

  • UncleSammy on Mar 20, 2011

    Nice share Thanks for sharing

  • d1dezire on Mar 21, 2011

    Find chapter three here
    http://authspot.com/novels/in-the-shadow-chapter-three/

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