9:10. He had only been outside for ten minutes.  Already he was feeling uncomfortable.  It was that hot sticky part of July.  Even the air felt heavy as he walked through it.  What he would not do to get back inside the air coindtioning with a glass of cold soda.  Back alone to him and just his surroundings.  The doctor said it was good for him to be out at least an hour a day.  Just an hour.  He did not have to run or excercise, for wieght was not his problem.  He always felt that other people, especially in groups, were npt healthy for him , so he avoided them altogether.  But, if he wanted to keep the doctor satified he had to.  Otherwise they would put him back and he did not want to go back.  He could not go back. There were people still left to punish.  People that had to be punished.  He would find them and punish them before they put him away again.  9:25.  Only thirty-five minutes to go. Thirty0five minutes and he could go back inside and continue his hunt for them.  All of them. He would get them all……………………………………….

This is just a start. Tell me what you thought. Let me know if you think that I can not do a story about this . I really want everyone’s honest opinion. I did not wanna write anymore till i got some feed back on this.