Beware,you might be in my character’s position one day!

      Minutes passed slowly;Seth couldn’t move his arms,his legs,his neck,but he was conscious.Suddenly a there was a song on the loudspeaker,and Seth recognized it instantly.He couldn’t believe his ears;it was a song he had laughed about and even written a mocking comment on Youtube;now the song got its revenge on him:

      ”It’s Friday,Friday

       Gotta get down on Friday

       Everybody’s looking forward to the weekend,weekend,

          Friday,Friday”

       And his biggest fears came true;the awful song of that teenage girl he had laughed about was being played on and on,and there wasn’t a damn thing he could do about it.he could hear” Friday,Friday” and ”yeah,yeah” and ”Partyin’,Partyin’ ” over and over again.”I’m gonna loose my mind!”he said to himself.”What do these freaks want from me?What have I done to deserve this?Please,someone save me!”

      But there was no one to come to rescue and hours went and the song was played on and on and on and Seth was powerless and devastated inside.Eventually it stopped;Seth feell asleep immediately.

     He awoke suddenly when someone threw a bucket of water in his face.He realized that he was no longer paralysed,but instead he was tied to a chair and there were all kinds of belts and straps attached to his chest and arms.There was a man standing infront of him,he was short and middle-aged and wore on an overcoat which reminded him of lieutenant Colombo,one of his favorite character,but there was nothing good in that man’s look.He was staring at Seth in a way that made Seth freeze with horror.Finally,the strange man started to talk:

     ”476,it’s time for a new stage of your training to begin!You must become a new and virtous man!”

     “What are you talikng about?Wasn’t I virtuous before?And who are you people,why won’t you answer me?”

     ”You must forget all your daily pleasures and be completelyb dedicated to the cause!”

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Comments (9)
  • Ebbin Jose on Jun 29, 2011

    Nice one

  • aprilsong on Jun 29, 2011

    interesting story

  • yellow rose on Jun 30, 2011

    I remember now,I remember how he started
    I can’t remember yesterday
    I remember just what they told me,…told me….
    I enjoy reading that story..thank you…

  • erwinkennythomas on Jun 30, 2011

    great!

  • gaby7 on Jul 1, 2011

    I loved this! Thanks!

  • juliachild on Jul 2, 2011

    Good share

  • briantaylor1992 on Jul 2, 2011

    What an interesting way to pass out… XD I wouldn’t want to hear that song either though. It’s so annoying >.< Interesting story though haha

  • beingwell on Jul 4, 2011

    Very nice! Good work!

  • yellow rose on Aug 14, 2011

    great story!

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