This is the first draft of a chapter from an upcoming book: Fize & I: A Trip Full Of Adventures With World’s Best Dog.
Pfizer was my best buddy for 15.5 years: he saved my life and I saved his. Enjoy.

 

The box. The tall thin narrow box it comes in, sitting there with all the others on the crowded supermarket shelf, is enough to provoke gagging and nausea. Cute kids on the cover or a picture of a steaming pile of, well, this is PG rated.

For my Father it was meatloaf. He claimed that in the war, (WWII), he ate enough meatloaf to pave all the roads in Maine. At the time I couldn’t understand where he was coming from, for Mom made the best meatloaf in town. The crusty part on top, stuck to the edge of the pan, was my favorite, and seldom made it to the kitchen table. Often I would get up during the night and either finish off the leftovers or put a substantial dent in it. The next day, if I hadn’t killed the whole thing off, would mean meatloaf and ketchup sandwiches. Yum!

Dad always got steak, which put a mighty serious dent in his meatloaf story. Mom said he had too many horrific memories of his Mothers’ meatloaf and was afraid to try hers. In all my life I can’t remember seeing Dad eat meatloaf. Probably a good thing for me, as it meant more to go around. He never had problems with mashed potatoes though, which I had heard were always served in the Army. As I grew older and would watch movies with my Dad on a Friday night or on a lazy Sunday afternoon, I would always be on the lookout for what they showed the soldiers eating. He would be deeply immersed into the movie, watching intently, and be shocked out of his black leather chair when I’d yell, “Mashed potatoes!”

Mashed potatoes were to die for. Mom used only the smaller red potatoes, from Washington State, as she said the Maine potatoes held too much moisture and not enough flavor. Nothing but whole milk and real butter were whipped into a frenzy with the boiled potatoes. Add some salt and I was in heaven. Have meatloaf on the side and what more could a kid ask for. Sunday mornings, were what. If, by some miraculous event, there were left over mashed potatoes, Mom would keep them tightly wrapped in the white, round top refrigerator. On those rare events she would first cook the eggs, in butter naturally, and then put the leftover mashed potatoes into the hot skillet. With more butter added, she would fry the potatoes until bits of wondrous crispy brown flakes were woven throughout the potatoes. Heaven on earth.

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  • OhSugar on Jul 25, 2009

    You are off with a great start. I can relate to some of what’s in your first chapter. Well done, can’t wait to read the next chapter.

  • Mr Ghaz on Jul 25, 2009

    Well done!..that was really great and very interesting story. wonderful start bro..you’re really magical story teller..keep it up..I enjoyed it.

  • Jenny Heart on Jul 25, 2009

    Like it so much. I want to hear more. Like it!

  • Joie Schmidt on Jul 25, 2009

    Very nice work*

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • Inna Tysoe on Jul 25, 2009

    That was great.

    Inna

  • Tanya Wallace on Jul 25, 2009

    Now that Clay, was a highly enjoyable read!! I must admit I can relate to most of what you wrote about. Thanks God for parents. Sometimes the fates seem to be against you that is for sure.I look forward to the next chapter.Thanks for sharing.Phenominal work.Cheers Tanya

  • Karen Gross on Jul 25, 2009

    Wow! Is this fiction, or your real life story? I’ve been through tough times, but I’ve always had enough (too much!) to eat.

    I don’t recall KD when I was a kid. We lived on Rice A Roni, which is similar, but a bit tastier. Instead of baby food, my teenage parents fed us mashed baloney. Then we mostly ate any food that came out of a can – Spaghetti- O’s, Ravioli, Klick (just like Spam). My mom even made stir fried chow mein with vegetables out of a can.It’s no wonder that my sister and I are overweight! Amazingly, we are both good cooks now, and we both love spinach, olives, brocolli, and all kinds of Mediteranean food. And my kids? They won’t eat anything with vegetables, and the more time I spend on a meal, the less chance there is that they will eat it. They came home from Grandma and Grandpa’s house one time and raved about this new food Grandma served them. Baloney.

  • Johanny Lisbeth on Jul 25, 2009

    this was so entertaining and true, can’t wait to read more, Clay.

  • PR Mace on Jul 25, 2009

    Very well written. Looking forward to more.

  • Ruby Hawk on Jul 25, 2009

    Clay, my friend you have a winner. Anyone would buy the book. I hope you have someone to look at it. I don’t think you would have any trouble getting it published. You have led an interesting life, that’s for sure.

  • rutherfranc on Jul 25, 2009

    agree with ruby here Clay.. nice start for a surely interesting book…

  • Francois Hagnere on Jul 26, 2009

    Excellent. Really enjoyed.
    Thank you,
    François

  • vasco on Jul 30, 2009

    great writing, thank you:
    I’ll will enjoy read more.

  • S A JOHNSON on Jul 31, 2009

    Lol, I really enjoyed reading this. In a way, you kind of remind me of my mom. It’s a good thing though.

  • Sonia Doreen on Aug 2, 2009

    Interesting read…The macaroni and cheese is delicious and mouth watering to recall.

  • deep blue on Sep 2, 2009

    Wow, that was creative writing stuff. Got me glued on my seat for long. Very well written, Clay. Thanks for sharing.

  • Olivia Reason on Sep 20, 2009

    I can relate to this- my mother cooks excellent food from scratch but there were times when we had to eat mixes from cans and boxes- so now, I hate boxed mac & cheese. (shudder).
    Great piece.

  • teddybear55 on Sep 21, 2009

    Interesting start to a great story. Can’t wait to read more.I love homemade mac and cheese too and also homemade meatloaf. I have a great recipe handed down from my mom. Box mac and cheese is okay, but it’s like eating goo when compared to the “real” stuff. Thanks for sharing your story.

  • workerbee on Nov 23, 2009

    Great story! Like how it tied so much together. Really not about mac & cheese at all!
    Bzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

  • Jane Jane on Jan 8, 2010

    Enjoy this one. =) Claps for you.

  • LewSethics on Jun 26, 2010

    Wow, not what I expected. Your flow of thought is very natural with well placed detail, not rushed, like my stuff. I like it.

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